This is by far one of the absolute best Hiei/Botan stories I have ever read. You do a commendable job of keeping them both in character, not the easiest thing ever.

I honestly don't have much critique, I wish I did since I know how valuable it is. For now, I would say to just continue this story. It has been 4-ish years since your last update D:

Wonderful <3

i love the story!

youll pick up the pace on upadting?! its been three freaking years!

I love it!! Pleases pleases write more soon!!

doesn't morning sickness take like WEEKS before they show up.
Last time i checked you didn't just get insaminated and them BAM your head in the toilet bowl.
Besides that, ** funny XD

omg, someone put this dude in a coma! i must say you go kazuma's personality down to a T. lol

WOWZERS!!
This is an amazing fic! I mean Hiei's in character as is anyone else! I mean I could totally see this happening if YYH if the plot was redone! But, alas that won't happen. Lol. Hm... is Botan pregnant now or no? Guess we'll find out next chapter, huh? Haha, Yusuke was so funny in this chapter! Botan's such a cute ditz, lol. Keep up the amazing fic!

Sa!

I see that although this is probably one of the very best HB fics out there, you still haven't up-dated for an eternity...

Please up-date! I won't stand it if you don't finish this wonderful fic! I simply won't!! True, I just got to this chapter yesterday and have only been a fan for two weeks... BUT STILL!

Now up-date! We all want to see if Yukina and Botan get baby boys or not!

Oh my goodness! I love your story! It's so hard to find a good HB fic out there. Please oh please update soon! I see that you haven't for...-gulp-...YEARS!

I am LOVING this so far! Your writing is perfect! It's pretty unique :) *ADDS TO FAVES!1!11!*

This is great I hope you update soon!

Alright...I love this story to death, I've just read it over...AGAIN! Alright now heres the other thing, yeah, a few months waiting to update may be fine...but a year is rediculous! I cannot believe that you have refused to update this long! A lot of people would be glad once you've updated I'm sure! If you don't get many reviews now...it may be from your lack of regular updating.

Good story!! I hop for more hiei x Botan in the next chap

oh!! This is one COOL AWESOME STORY!! i like ur plot and all adn the humor is soo funny and u noe wen its all about passion and stuff! i admire dat and ur jokes are so funny!! BOTAN HIEI 4EVA! It was cute wen it was their moment. i dun really lyk d pairing Kuwabara adn Yukina...but i guess its kinda alright here.

Wow...O.O, wat a steamy romance with Botan and hiei, hehehehehe. hope u can make more if possible and i read ur a/n, Botan's feeling not so hot?! oh, i noe! hehe.

UPDATE! its alraedy like what? 2006? yeah, u should update or post somethin up coz alota ppl are waiting! ^_^ PLEASE?!?!

this story is so great! u really need to update!