That was sad. ::sob:: I really hope this doesn't happen so no flames I love D/N.

Well I was left speechless. Good thing I'm typing.

aww... that was soo sad well anyway that as good, g2g

-lizzie

My goddess, who can you write something like this? Im crying! Poor Daine...though its even now likely to happen sometime (but I so desperately hope it wont!) how can Numair be so hard, so cold? She was pregenant! And all the time it was him who pushed the love, he kissed her first, he wanted to marry her - how can he suddenly forget his love?

That is so sad. when i was telling my sis about it she's like 'i thought you loved numair'(I do) any way when i told her my voice cracked and i nearly cried. you are an awesome writer

Keep it up

omg! so sad...but so good at the same time. keep it up! but, i relaly do love DN... *sniff*

oh my god! im crying to death!

_ more?

That was the Best fanfiction I've ever read!

Write something even more tragic. I just can't stand the excitement!

No no no,

jesus, your a depressive little thing arent you!

that was so sad *snif*

That was good, but shame, shame, shame, shame on you! Breaking N&D up like that. *mutters about evil minds and stomps off* ;;

How could you! For the love of God, CHANGE IT! Make is a nightmare or something.

P.S. Very good writing.

You're pro D/N and you wrote that? It's sad, it's good writing, and as of now, I hate the Numair in this story. I mean you wrote it well and if I was feeling gloomy and maybe a little grumpy with Numair I might've written it myself, but I hate what happens..