This is pretty interesting, but to be honest with you, it feels more like an original piece of writing. (And to be even more honest, I think it makes a splendid stand-alone original piece of prose. BETTER than 'fic, in that sense.)

Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
-Manna

Beautiful as always!

O.O Wow... Beautiful. This is great, JessAngel. Short yet sweet, I love it. *Sighs* I wish I could write like this. This is beautiful and you deserve extra applause. *More clapping from other people* Good job!

BJL

Fabulous.

Rebirth within all the myrth of love. Delight.

I don't know how you do it but it's amazing all the same. It's beautiful, heart-wrenching, and expressing more emotions in a hundred words than I could in an entire story. I'm upset that you'll be leaving us but two more pieces, from you, are greatly needed and for that, I'm in infinitely greatful.

~Shuffle Queen~

Oh, Jess...this was beautiful.

Yes, I think this goes nicely with my latest fic though you have a way with words much better than I do. I cannot believe how much you can say in few words. That's a gift. (Also, I'd like to think that your fic, "When I Awake" goes with my first G Gundam fic.)

Thank you so much for dedicating this to me! I was so moved when I saw the summary. You just don't know how much. YOU are the sweet presence here.

I look so forward to your next two pieces and hope that your retirement from the G Gundam section is only temporary.

As for this beautiful piece of work, I loved how you described the precious little one. Everytime that Domon and Rain look at their child they will be amazed at just how strong their love is for their little one--the little one which they had created through their own strong love for each other.

Thank you Jess Angel, Jen

Your drabbles are like thumbnails of magnificent paintings--you say so much with very little--i.e. Rain's thoughts as she carries Domon's child.
Beautiful.