Reviews for The Sea Calls Us Home

loveofthering
2004-09-24
ch 1,

abuseThat was a wonderfully descriptive story about Jova...I absolutely loved it...
I felt so sorry for her...
I hope you keep writing, your stories are awesome!

Malara
2004-09-22
ch 1,

abuseHm... well done!! Very interesting!! Very short and sweet!! Well done!!

I think that I should read you other stories before offering advice, so if you don't think this advice is worth worry about, IGNORE IT, PLEASE!! Sorry, but some people get really upset when I offer advice.

Advice: Elven names are a very personal and important thing. Elves don't have nicknames and 'Jova' is not elvish, to my knowelge. OKAY, YOU MIGHT HAVE SOME LONG STORY AS TO HOW SHE GOT HER NAME OR YOU MIGHT JUST NOT WANT TO TAKE THE TIME TO FIND AN ELVISH NAME. EITHER WAY, YOU DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO MY ADVICE!! IT'S JUST A SUGGESTION! I COULD CARE LESS IF AN ELF DOES OR DOES NOT HAVE AN ELVISH NAME, BUT IF YOU REALLY WANT TO BE TECHANICAL, THERE'S A PIECE OF ADVICE FOR YOU!!

I just didn't want to offend you in any way. Some people take advice the wrong way *shakes head*.

Really well-done story!! Keep up the amazing work!!

Malara :}

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