 Storm Warning 11/25/08 . chapter 10ha that was good and fuuny love kel character in this. |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/31/07 . chapter 7That was cute.
But there is only a few more chapters, and you haven't really set up a story for them...
Though if it's just a little glimps into the possiblity of them meeting, it's a cute idea. |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/31/07 . chapter 6It's a bummer that I'm almost through with this. It really is fun to read.
I feel sorry for Daine and Nummy. A normal child is hard enough to handle without it being able to shapeshift and climb the draperies. :) |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/28/07 . chapter 5That was even worse! I think you two enjoy torturing us hapless readers. And for that you are evil. May Magneto drop a very heavy metal object (preferably something sharp) on both of your heads.
:) |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/28/07 . chapter 4That was way to short! We need more! :)
And why would Neal wish to kill the 'blue one' as you put it? There was no explanation to that little tidbit of info. :)
Next chappy. |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/28/07 . chapter 3It was humorous. I very nearly choked while reading it. You should have a warning lable somewhere in here. :)
I like the way you both are writing this, it's interesting to read a story from two different writers since the styles vary so greatly. :)
Onward! |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/28/07 . chapter 2That was fun. Though a little fast, so it was a bit confusing. Other than that, it's getting more and more interesting.
O... It's a bummer Kitty didn't have Lockeed with her. That would have been so fun to have him and Skysong in the same fic. |
 Proud to be an X-Nerd 12/28/07 . chapter 1Ok, this looks fun.:D Why has no one thought of it before or since? I can't wait to see where you take this. |
 The Blasphemous Contessa 12/9/05 . chapter 2C'est tres amusante! J'aime beacoup le confusionne et la comedie. |
 Elfsquire90 5/1/05 . chapter 2good job with dianes daughters name the name that Pierce gives her is Sarralyn |
 Tei Hune 5/1/05 . chapter 10. |
 maliaphire 3/31/05 . chapter 9kl wot happens do the x-men get home ok? |
 Peachy Lime Daiquiri 3/30/05 . chapter 9"I always knew you were disgusting," Sam muttered. "But that's a new low." He went off to be mentally scarred with Rahne.
Hehehe...funny! I LUVERZ that! Oh, and:
"Gah!"
"Sounds like Bonedancer found Remy," Neal observed.
Said swamp rat came walking around the corner, trying to pry the skeletal bird from his hair. "What de hell is this thing!" he cried.
"Bonedancer," Kel explained. "Ressurected fossil."
"Ah, oui, I feel so much better knowin' its name... now PLEASE get it out of my hair!"
Although I would be scared shiyatless if Bonedancer was in my hair. Or within ten feet of me. Skeletal things scare me. Well, except PotC, cuz of the whole turkey jerky texture thing. But seriously, a few weeks ago, I found out that George I the Skeleton Dude in my high's Physio lab (George II is in the PE class, and PLASTIC, thank Rob) is a REAL SKELETON! As in he was once a real MAN! EW! Seriously, now I'm terrified to take Physio when I'm a Senior. Plus the whole dissecting a cat thing...(shudders) Well, anywayz, UPDATE SOON, YO! |
 MuggleBuddy 3/30/05 . chapter 9I can't wait to see how the spell works! Please update ASAP! |
 kryscrossed 3/25/05 . chapter 8Good stuff, I really like it! |