That's cool. Dark, but cool!

morbid... that's what i am... this was great though!

that was cool!

okay that is not very nice, but it is very well writen

That was good :)! Please keep writing!

LOL, I have a story that starts like that (Tara came home...). The end was a BIG surprise. I was expecting Tara to be the slayer or something. That last line was what made the story creepy. Don't be dicouraged, you're a good writer.

Good story. I was sort of thinking as a twist at the end, the vampires that showed up would be the people who replied to the e-mail. But it didn't turn out that way. It was a pretty funny idea though. Brought to my mind an image of a deraged lunatic out there threatening people with stakes. LOL

I'm not particularly a fan of the kind of Vampire you're using in the story, so I can't really say what I think without being biased. It could use more detail in places. Not sure how that could work though. And it kind of seems open ended, left hanging, though not really at the end... I donno, I have no idea what I'm talking about.