bad story pester and wendy don't act like that its just sick

Loved this parody of Peter Pan! I thought it was hilarious! Plus lots of WP goodness too.

WAT HAPPENED TO WENDY...AND WHEN DOES TIGER LILY ATTAK PETER AND TRY TO GRAB HIS... "YOU KNOW" THERE ALL ONLY 14 FOR LORD'S SAKE. other than that good story

Hahaha that was great. I'm off to read the next chapter.

that was very cute

Let me just tell you what this story is about. Lust! It has absolutely nothing to do with love and I find it just absolutely filthy. Believe me, I'm a teen and I absolutely hate this. I don't hate you, just hate the fact that you would right something like this. Wendy is not like this. She has a crush on Peter, but she has common sense and the Wendy in this story is a complete idiot. I am just asking you this: Why would you right a story that totally lies about who these characters are and defies God? You may have written this story, but please do not live this way! It will only lead to death and destruction...
signed,
Jesus Freak

I loved it! It made me laugh, but I could definitely see it!

Do you know you should write another one with this genre, it was so fun! It has proved that you can write variety stories. Moreover the way you wrote HER was fantastic, not fragil but strong and wicked, I DID love it!
Looking forward to a brilliant new PP fanfiction, EVERYDAY!

ah! such a wonderfully crazy good story!! i shall read t over and over again!

Oh geez, I've waited for how long for that. This was the one that kicked me on reading your fics here and in your homepage. And let me tell you that I loved every bit of it. All of it. The whole lot. All your fics made me laugh, cry, get flushed and all the emotions mother nature gave human beings.

Anyway, this was, as usual, fantastic and I hope that this is not the last PP fanfic you've written.

(And I also hope that your homepage will be fixed soon)

okay, so I only have time to read the first chapter, but I am loving this. I can't help giggling (during classes, no less) and I am just loving this. Wendy seems a little forward--scratch that, she's a lot forward, but that just makes it fun to read.

Yay! *Standing ovation* I'm glad to see you finished this story (now if I could only say the same for my own Star Wars fic...). Anyway, it was superb as always and a real joy and pleasure to read. Until next time, keep up the good work!

*"Go away Tink," Peter growled.* LOL Loved it. Plain and simple. :-)

--Marie K.

OMG! This is such a great story! Can't wait to read more!!

-Halli Raye

Please, please, please continue this story soon!! I've read all of your Peter Pan stories and I love every one of them. If you were a published author, I would buy your work by the truckload. I can't get enough!

wonderfulness!