I hoped no one finds out that...they did it...because if they do, I have a bad feeling about this...

OH no! I can't believe she actually did that! Oh no! Why'd she do that?! She must have been so embarrassed!

That was a burn, the last thing Kagome said to Inuyasha. That was like the greatest slickest insult you could say. That was awesome! I loved this chapter, as i think I will the others. You're an awesome author, and I mean that litterally.

Lol! Poor Kagome! She shouldn't have said that to him. Lol! Great chapter.

I just wanted to comment on thisfirst chapter, because it was one of the best first chapters I have ever read. Ever. It's awesome! This story...it sounds so...real! It's like this really did happen, and that this woman was by her advisors, pressured into writing this. I love it already. And I think that I might comment on every chapter! It's a great story, and I have to say, that you should really write a book of this! Like a real book.

Hello! I've just finished reading this story, after reading Fan Mail and Perfectly Flawed all at one go. All were beautifully written stories, and I had great pleasure reading them all. :D
However, I would like to recommend some other stories that I'm quite sure you would find more than enough to be placed in your favourite authors/stories.( If you haven't read her stories already.)
This author is BlackMamba07. I'd like to recommend all her beautiful oneshots (eg. Tokyo Kid and the Demon, A Question of Probability, On the Night of the New Moon, Vigil and more). Plus, if it weren't for her, I wouldn't be reading your stories, seeing as you're one of BlackMamba07's favourite authors. :D
I wish you the best of luck in the rest of your stories, and I look forward to seeing your works again soon :)

GREAT FIC!

this story is AWSOME
it actually made me cry :)
i love the idea, i love how you wrote it
I LOVE IT ALL! :)

dolphingirl0113,

This is truly one of the most wonderful stories I've ever had the privilege to come across. I absolutely love how you've drawn your characters so well that I find myself relating to their experiences. And I suppose I should mention that this story has had me bawling unashamedly on...more than one occasion. XD

It has been a blessing traversing the very corners of your story with your characters thus far. You are a wonderful author, and I'm very eager to read more of your work.

Love and blessings to you from a fellow musician ^ ^

I liked this a lot! Thanks for writting this! ^_^

It's over...I like it. Kudos, excellent.

GO you!

~Mistyfire

Waitaminute...Did you say Oregon?? That was where I was born! Execept I had to move...to another state. Yeah. Anyway, I envy you...your writing ability, plus humor, and the fact that you get to stay in Oregon...roar. I'm a little jelous here. >.<

~Anyway, going to finish the story. How DO you get so many awards...? It's creepy. Even my sibling, who has absolutly no respect or interest in fanfiction let me read this...cuz I convinced the little brat that this was good^^

And I was right.

~Mistyfire

-applauds-
that was an amazing story!
thank you so much for writing it!!
hope you continue writing ^.^

i cant believe i didnt add this story to my c2 yet! i remember reading this story when it was still incomplete then i stopped since there wasnt an update for a long time. i terribly regret stopping but now, i read the whole thing again and seriously made an imprint in my mind. a moving piece, excellently-written. the language the characters spoke really made it all realistic; the character descriptions were just overwhelming and basically the whole storyline is just well plotted out. this does remind me of 'The Other Boleyn Girl', maybe it inspired u to write this amazing piece? anyways, im glad to have found this story again and i wish u the best ur future writings!!

kimiko

YOU ARE AMAZING!