Reviews for Tactics OneHalf

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BlackRoseFire 2007-09-24 ch 3,	abuseI liked this fan fiction very much. I hope that you will continue to write.
Blackdex 2007-05-10 ch 3,	abuseWell, it’s not what I expected, but I still enjoyed it. Ciao
JhyarelleDrakon 2006-11-15 ch 3,	abuseCool
ranma-saotome-cursed-fighte... 2004-10-29 ch 1,	abuseclassic man. that was an amusing read though i still think you were to generous with their beatings. it would been funny if ritz had used akanes mallet on her to knock her senelss. oh well amusing read keep up the writing because i sure will. to be honest some of your stories sparked more ideas for...later man
Materia-Blade 2004-10-14 ch 3,	abusecool fic but you practically could have made it an abnormally long one shot.
Gopu 2004-10-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseGreat chapter and end to this story
Jerry Unipeg 2004-10-14 ch 3,	abuseGreat ending.
Ormik 2004-10-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseEnding of the story was too quick. At one moment Ranma and Ritz were in Ritz's house in St. Ivalice and few seconds later they were in court and battling against Tendos. And immediately after the fight we are told that that's it. Everything just happened too fast. Slower pace would have done miracles. I still think about that ending where Ranma just stayed in Juuban teaching martial arts and never using his summoning skills again. It just doesn't sound right. Why didn't they stay in Ivalice? It would probably have been much better place for them.
Silverscale 2004-10-14 ch 3,	abuseI liked it. You have a good imagination.
Darkkiblade 2004-10-13 ch 3,	abuseGJ on finishing this fanfic. always thought that akane would cheat on ranma.
Adyen 2004-09-28 ch 2, anon.	abuseNot bad for a short... Tho they have so much GP that I doubt they'd have much trouble replacing the stuff. :P
MingShun 2004-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseHmm...interesting story, but it could be done much better. First of all, your action is too fast... indicating weak detail. Next, the relationship between Ritz and Ranma seems artificial at best. I mean...meeting someone and falling in love at first sight? Possible, but the way it's laid out in this story...it's lust right? Last, I dislike Akane, but I have to admit that she's absolutely insane in this story. The insane one belongs in a psychiatric ward, too many of them are loose already (I can name several stories with insane Akanes) If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, I'll volunteer. It's a great crossover, I don't want to see it fail.
Gopu 2004-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseGreat chapter
ranma hibiki 2004-09-27 ch 2,	abusethanks-sorry i didnt notice, i get so wrapped up in the fic i missed it. thanks for using some of my ideas. i have so many floating around i dont know what to do w/ them, and i cant write stroys. only imagine them :( but if you ever get a writers block let me know and ill break it down like a popcan before a steamroller comments-from the WORDING of it kasumi and nabiki will be joining them in the ffta world somethime in the future(soon or later i dont know) but i can imagine kasumi as a magic user(most likely a white mage) if she goes, or the uncommon and rarley used kusumi/fighter bit. nibiki is about the same save i see her as more of an assasain or archer. ideas- 1) ranma keeps his magic in his world 2)he cant use magic in his world so he adapts them into techniques(HIRYU SHOTEN HA REVISED!! DIAMOND DUST!) 3)same as first, but adds them into his style as a complete mix(not to be confused w/ other ranma/magic user storys where he can use his style or the magic as 2 seprate styles, or where he uses magic while fighting but cant do magic unles he is fighting like in Sorcerer's Solution,ranmage) 4)again same as first, ranma summons a monster(personally im thinking shiba, ifreat, unicorn, and ramuh)and they end up staying w/ him in his world(not enough mana to send them back, so much mana they dont have to go back, "the rules dont are different here so we dont have to go back if we dont want to" etc...)
Jerry Unipeg 2004-09-27 ch 2,	abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

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