Oh how sad! I wonder if Harry had of lived would Pansy be Draco's wife...

I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes. This is absolutely heartbreaking. You've captured Severus' pain wonderfully and I love your use of Lily. I felt the emotions of both of them. *sniffle*

I'd say very in character. good one

absolutely wonderful!
This piece was beautifully written, well done!

The emotions were perfect and i adored every bittersweet line.

Wow. This was amazing.

This was beautiful, chest burning, sobbingly beautiful. You just hit, dead on, the emotional core and held and wrung till it was empty.

That's so sad, but sweet.
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JA

Hey there, D! This was so sad! I like this, and I hope you make another!

"Chicks dig giant robots."- Jamie

Good chapter, even though I think Potter is a snarky bastard. It's kind of funny that Lily is a bit of a hypocrite. Fifth year, the only one who would "help" her was Snape while that SOB made fun of her. Then she ends up with that batarde, and says she would never leave him. Well then, why is she married to that jackass?

Keep up the good work.

PS: This wasn't a flame. I think it's a very good story even though I cannot stand Potter. He doesn't deserve Lily anymore than Snape does.
Later.

give me a moment while I curl in a ball and cry my eyes out...real tears not just rain. Gees that was so sad. Severus and lily :(And Draco loved Harry? And the poem...its gonna take me all day to recover from this. Good job.

Wow...It was wierd, but the feelings and descriptions seemed to leap off the page. Brutal hinesty in what Severus was thinking, feeling and saying. It was really good.

Ok.. This story is fab.. I'd always loved angst.. But sorry Im a lil blur.. Who died? Harry? I like the poem by John Donne.. Very nice..