Hey Any! Thank you so much for this wonderful present! I LOVE it! Twins, a party, and my fav elf saving the day. It's terrific! (hugs) *sniff* Thank you again, my friend. You made my day very special indeed. :o)
Oh, what a delightful story! I love little peaks like this, when Legolas' friendship with the brothers shines through such little words! Beautifully done and sweet!
The beginning was pretty funny, but I think it slowed down a bit towards the end. You have a good plot, but I guess I just can't picture Elves getting that drunk.
~Kai