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It's Ternion... The fearsome three-some of Overload/Cinderblock/Plasmus is called Ternion.

I liked your story, but just to let you know, Blackfire and Starfire can get out of metal cells. They can melt it, or punch their way through.

You have a real Talent 4 storytelling hope your next one comes soon lol. We love it. U Rock so hard!

Um not to frame you or ennything but in this chapter 4 in the last chapter you said her bed was pink and in the first chapter he confessed his feelings. Unless he told her he loved her before the storie! Oh my god im so sorry!
Love,
ROB/STAR LOVE

I liked your story. It was very good, and it wasn't too long, but, it was long enough. It was interesting. I'm glad your story didn't have anyone else in it that either had a crush on Starfire or anyone else that had a crush on Robin like in other stories where they sort of have to compete for each other. I hate stories that have either Robin or Starfire with someone else, and stories that are way too dramatic. Your story was great! :)

aw! cute!

Nice Keep it going

The story was awesome i loved it all, this is agreay story and I think allot of other people like it too.

that was bloody great! well done i would never do better my self.i hav red allot of these storys that people hav rote. and this is just super. it has all the stuff in it.love action revenge.all that.i was thinking not pushing you but when u hav some free time just do more chapters.i hav msn so if u wish to speak with me on there feel free heres addy

Wow... that was brilliant! they should make that into a episode you should be a script writer 4 the show i would enjoy it even more!!
wow i admire u 4 such a great story !
best wishes!
Chloe xox aka Sassy Raven

It was really touching...Well, if you have anymore good stories, i'd be happy to read them...^^

It's really nice! Not only that, i can use this to occuppy my boredom. ^^ Great job!

Hello Mich aka Starfire, i'm very impressed by ur story and i hope there will b more. ^^ Nice job!

I loed it. The end...when star said for robin to protect her that was...well really cool. Super job. By far the best.