|Reviews for Just One Day|
| kie 9/27/07 . chapter 2
seriously, love, that was awesome.
| jasmyn 8/4/07 . chapter 2
i liked the ending the most.
| jasmyn 8/4/07 . chapter 1
this is a great idea for a fanfic.
| PhantasyDreamer 7/29/07 . chapter 2
Great story! I loved it even though it was short. Keep up the good work
| Sora 7/17/07 . chapter 2
Wow. That was...wonderful. Since I have found a decent story, I am going to give a proper review.
Spelling and grammar: Only one or two mistakes really jumped out at me, and they were easily dismissed. You could probably avoid any at all in the future just by reading over your work. (or having somebody read over it for you). Pretty good. Definitely refreshing after so many stories typed lyk tihs becuz tey r 2 lazy 2 uz spelng or grmmr. (I don't mind people reviewing like this, but an entire story typed in chat-speak is a little too much.
Keeping everyone in-character: Done really well. Sasuke showed a little bit more emotion than usual, but that was explained in his P.O.V. pretty well. Sakura was herself, as was everybody else.
Plot: Love it. Yes, there is the whole "freeing Sasuke from his curse" element, which is overused, but you pulled it off without offending the reader's intelligence. None of the romence felt forced, and the ending, while a little rushed, was sweet. The angst was at a surprisingly low level, which, again, seperates this story from the rest. The story was character driven, which earns bonus points from me.
Altogether, I loved it! I am going to go read your other fan-fictions now. Ta-ta!
| sakura 94 7/3/07 . chapter 2
I loved the story!&,no,the ending wasn't rushed at all...it actually seemed appropiate!I hope you write more stories like it soon, I'll look forward to it!
| cres-cres 6/9/07 . chapter 2
ohh! more! u should add more!
| ladyZOOM 5/29/07 . chapter 2
XD i love it! i know you had submitted this fic a LONG time ago but i think u should continue it i love how they just swapped boddies! nice plot
| you.broke.a.promise 5/27/07 . chapter 2
I really liked your story
| KinKitsune01 5/24/07 . chapter 2
Much love for the switching-body stories!
| Sienna Maiu 5/3/07 . chapter 2
| Sienna Maiu 5/2/07 . chapter 1
neh, it's fine.
(dead account, I know)
| JellyJelly 4/22/07 . chapter 2
that was just...beautiful *-*
i love this story it's funny! xD
| XxMoonlitxCherryxBlossomxX 4/5/07 . chapter 2
This is a perfect two-shot. YOU'RE a perfect writer. Congrats! YOu've made it to my Authors alert AND My favorite stories! .
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| horses rock 3/12/07 . chapter 2
it was totally awesome! i love the ending.