 Claustrophobic Vampire 2008-04-20 . chapter 12he :)
i really love this story :)
its soo cute and.. *sigh*
I love all the flashbacks :) |
 Aimee -or Chibiness- 2007-12-02 . chapter 12I really liked this... There was certainly a level of OOC-ness, but I think that some is allowable, given that this isn't set in the Feudal Era, and such. You kept it "real" enough to make it work. |
 catseyebow 2007-05-13 . chapter 1LOVE IT |
 Purple1 2006-12-26 . chapter 12I rememeber one way you described having sex: the horizantle tango. Hahahahah Dear god I laughed so hard at that. Well, anywho...good job! I really enjoyed it :) |
 toofast 2006-08-10 . chapter 12 The best thing I read this summer not many fics can win me over like this This gets a 200273918463892047349302753210 out of 10 :) |
 Star.Shinee 2006-04-30 . chapter 12Wow.
That, was bloody brilliant. Probably my favourite AU Miroku and Sango fic, and I've read plenty of them.
Shall I go into details? LOL. xD
First off, I love the memories you put in. They're so well put together. They're so typical, it's cute. Being typical isn't a bad thing. I love the flashbacks you put in. It makes the story seem more realistic, and yet you almost never see those types of memories in fanfiction. =)
How they met was very unique. It was really kawaii, I just loved it. Her accidentally stealing something, and his search. ^^ It was so sweet how he gave her his jacket and paid for her to get home and in all that rain. Very cute, indeed.
Kohaku's character was definitely a go for me. =) In stories, he's usually not there or he's all shy/quiet and keeps to himself. Not that it's a bad thing when that happens. I just like the change you put in. He was so honest, and so funny. It was great to read something that makes you laugh out loud. Especially, the whole "frying of potatoes" thing in... Chapter 2? Lol.
I'm slightly confused on one thing though. I mean, I understand that Sango hurt Miroku by lying to him, and trying to forget about him . . . But how did Miroku hurt Sango? By leaving her? LOL. I guess I missed a few things.
The build up to how they got back together was perfect. Her memories of him asking her those questions. You answered them flawlessly. It's probably my most favourite bit in the story.
The lyrics you used were great. Then again, I'm sure that's what you based the chapters on. The last one made me smile. =)
I think that you fit their characters into the setting wonderfully. The jobs suited them quite well. They were kept in character nicely. The whole rain bits added great effect to the story. :)
And Kuranosuke . . . Wowie! Lol.
I loved the whole, "You're not a fairytale, but you're not a sappy romance novel" bit too. It was great. And in chapter 11, the whole "I'm asking you not to go." Really made me smile.
Also, the bit about Sango's car. I'm not sure if the whole "You're supposed to break it, not ** on it" part of the fact that Inuyasha hit a fire engine was supposed to be funny . . . But I thought it was hilarious.
Really. Truly. :)
You did an amazing job on this story, and I'm honestly surprised that you didn't receive thousands of reviews for it.
It's really wonderful.
Wow. That's probably the longest review I've ever written. ^^
Please update your other stories soon! |
 mylovemiroku 2006-03-12 . chapter 12This story was absoultely Brilliant. Probably the best AU sango/miroku fic I've read. It was SO real, and believable. I mean, I'm all for the romantic fluff, and I loved the little preludes to each chapter, made me all giddy and stuff. But in reality, it is the angsty not-so-perfect times in life that make us appreciate what we have. Loved it. I need to start incorporating some angst in my fics too, so that way the little romanctic parts, actually mean something. It all seemed to come full circle too, the song quotes, the preludes and the mystery of why they broke up. Absolutely brillinat. |
 Little Flea 2005-11-09 . chapter 12one of da best. simply luv it. |
 Majime Noubenka 2005-10-14 . chapter 12I liked it very much, although the angst was a bit much every now and then, but hey to each her own eh?? Keep writing though. |
 Cabbage Rose 2005-07-15 . chapter 12Another great story to add to my MirSan C2. This was an adoreable story. It was very believable though. It showed issues as well as fluff. Most stories are all fluff and nothing goes wrong, but everyone knows that real life is not like that. This story was great and it made me smile! Thanks a lot! |
 Summer Rain 2005-07-14 . chapter 1 This is a really good story. ^.^ |
 FlamingRedFox 2005-02-19 . chapter 12Okay, I probably should have reviewed this weeks ago, but... you fill in the blank with a fittin excuse. I'm too lazy.
Anyway, I loved it! It was soo sweet! Absolutley wonderful!
And, poor Kohaku... he just had to go and get himself squished, didn't he. Did he ever succede in soundproofing? I guess I'll never know.
This was such an wonderful chappie! It was soo sweet, and funny, and you just had to put a dramatic flashback in the beginning, didn't you. Do you ever depress yourself with all that drama?
Anyway, this was an excellent story! So sad, and yet so happy. One of the best drama's I've ever read. Also one of the few dramas I actually read during the period of time I supposedly swore off drama. Never did succede 100% with that cause this story was too good to pass up. I loved every little bit of it! Wonderful, wonderful job. You are fantastic when it comes to writing drama! TTFN, ta, ta, for now! |
 Priya 2005-01-29 . chapter 12 Im reading this after you finished this story and i think it is the best Sango and Miroku FanFic I've ever read!! You are one talented author! |
 YoukaiTajiyaSango 2005-01-16 . chapter 12Aw that was great!! ^-^ Good job! |
 chocolatechipp 2005-01-11 . chapter 12HOORAY! After much frustration and screaming at my computer screen, everything turns out just like it was intended. Fate. Destiny. SO MANY WORDS FOR IT!
Its been a rather lovely story, I must say. Thanks for a good read (hard to find these days). Hope to read something of yours again soon!
I do feel bad for Kohaku. Poor boy. If I were him, I would move out as soon as I turned 18.
Well, its been fun. See ya later!
~Shokora no Sakuhen (aka chocolatechipp) |
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