I just know you sent me that email because I criticized your story. Did you know that there's a reason for the reviews? So that readers can do some constructive 'commenting.' It's so you can improve your story...? Unless you don't want to. Then it's your call.

Not everyone knows japanese you know. You can't just assume that. Besides, the full metal alchemist manga I'm reading doesn't have those words in it. I don't even know what Nii-san is...and I'm too lazy to check it up.

And in accordance to the other section of your email, the 'u' is sometimes needed and sometimes not. It all depends on what the word is. English slang screws this language over several times over. I'm not going to bother in going to details probably because some japanese person is going to stare at my review and say, "NO NO NO! THAT'S NOT RIGHT!"

Heys... this is angelique... quite a nice job on the story... the story line runs along quite smoothly. The yaoi thing wasn't really necessary though... anyways... sounds nice... maybe you can tell me more about Full Metal Alchemist another time. It seems quite interesting.

Could you please not mix japanese words with the story? It's not like the words "neko," "arigatou," or "nii-san" are universal.

It's spelled "Gozaimasu," and "desune."
It's no big deal but I just thought you should know.

Hehe, knew you didn't mean it that way. ^__^ Just pulling your leg, 's all. I'm just glad you updated so quickly!

Aaww, I love the way you made Roy so much concern for the boys. Very IC, really! And don't think I'm thinking about shonen-ai innuendos right now, because I'm not! =P Haha, the quest for the loveberries hasn't finished yet. ^__^ Poor Ed and Al. If Ed knew Roy was enjoying a steak at that exact moment... XD

I'll be waiting for your update~

P.S: my belated Happy Birthday wishes~

Hey~ XD I'm a perverted yaoi writer. Should I take offense? =P

Haha, I thought this was going to be a one-shot at first, but I was delighted to find out otherwise! Hehehehee, now what's this about a women-only marketplace? XD I can't imagine Roy knowing about this, otherwise he would've take up the job of finding those loveberries for himself. Buwa~

I've got only thing to comment on: sometimes you forget to capitalize the first letter of a sentence. Nothing big, but it's the only thing I could give critique on... about.. I can't write.

^__^ Please update~ And good luck with making Ed a toy. He can be very bratty when he wants to. XD See ya~