I like this story the best more the rest of them make more
chapter ASAP!

wow, sakura could cause everyone there to die, wat a dumbutt

Hiya,

I'm sure ppls will forgive you IF YOU UPDATE!

PLEASE update soon!

Kimmy

UPDATE!

cool

This is a cute story. Please continue. Sakura and Syaoran forever.

Finally! Now I get to know what happen to this chapter... anyway it seems that things are getting much worst than the last chapter. That's not all, it's been 10 years passed in this story and Sakura was still waiting for her precious Syaoran to return... And Syaoran was looking for other ways to find the escape from Dorothy.

Keep it up. I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's getting exciting now.

yay Kero! aw man a General?! sakura trained hard, didn`t she?

this is a good story update fast

You have some mistakes that makes it aggravating to read like,
"Sakura was in her room and heard explodes."
You probably meant explosion.
Also, you used,
"...Her eyes widened when there was not skinned android jumped towards the window and crashed the window."
Well, I don't know how to reword it. You could try, "Her eyes widened when there was an android, with no skin cover, who jumped towards the window and crashed through it.
I'm not sure if that makes sense either. Yeah, it is hard.
You have to like use the correct words. But whatever, I make mistakes like that too. Shrugs. It was still a great story because it's so original! Keep up the good work! This is not a flame by the way!=D I'll keep reading whenever ya update!

Syaoran has red pimples under his chin and those mite be blushes? What?! That's a weird way to put it. Anyway! Wow! YOur story is so original! Who was that other robot in the story? How old is Syaoran in robot years?(If there is such things) Maybe I'll find the answer in the next chapter. L8er!

The first chapter isn't boring. I thought it was interesting.

I must say this episode was very interesting!
I hope you update soon! But what I don't understand is why Syaoran said he despised Sakura's existence. Is it because he's an android?

Great Chapter! It seems that Syaoran has a liking towards Sakura.

oh I wouldn't think that Sakura would conceder Syaoran as a possission.