Reviews for Destiny's Crucible

Reviews For: Destiny's Crucible

acepro Evolution 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseBRILLIANT
Wanderer3 2005-06-11 ch 4,	abuseNice. But I just feel I gotta point out. The girl with the pointy ears, purple skin and triangular marks on her face: Blink from the AoA and Exiles. she got those face marks in AoA from what I know. She's one of my favorite mutants...purple always was my favorite color. ;^P
evil-kenshin 2005-02-22 ch 3,	abusefinally a update, great chapter
Agent-G 2005-02-19 ch 1,	abuseWell you asked and here I am, in the comics Rogue's been using the alias Anna Raven but I doubt that's her real name, got it from this site called UncannyXMen Net Actually Scott can't control his powers becuase he suffered brain damaged from the plane crash that killed his parents and it was the part of his brain that could control his powers. Okay you corrected with this later but earlier you said he couldn't control it because of his X-Gene, which is it? Covert-ops team? You make it sound like their a military force. Although I noticed a major mistake, if this takes place after Apocalypse then Jean and Scott have already graduated from high school (since they're both 19 at that point), if you remember it was at their graduation that Rogue under Mesmero used her to unleash Apocalypse I though Jean's powers were just Telekenisis and Telepathy, she's dosen't have any other abilites unless she has the Pheonix powers. Are you sure Bayville is in Massachusetts? Plus I thought the X-Men were well known at this point? So if that firend was so into it I'm surprised he didn't know who they were. Plus you called Kitty a Jr. then a sophmore at school. The clone girl is X-23, try typing in Beyound X-Men Evolution in a seach engine and you'll find THE best site to help you with your fic, it has all the information you might ever ned about the show. I like the story (could either use corrections like I said or just say this is AU in the summery so people think the mistakes aren't really mistakes) Although I like Jesse I just don't find his reaction to what happened believable. I mean finding out you did that to nearly your entire family and caused the death of one of them would devastate a person but he just seemed to have gotten over the whole thing and dealt with it too easily for my tastes. Plus the fact that you said the authorities didn't look too kindly on mutants and just let him go like that. That was a surprise. PS, in responce to that one review whatever Vincent's original powers would have been are kind of a mystery (like his real name) since he never deleoped his powers naturally. Oh and Kai (Shadow) is about 17
Aaron 2005-02-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseI like this story, it's not bad how Jesse adjust to being a member of the institute and school and his powers. nice how he's bonding with Jean about his powers, and Rogue, Scott and Kurt, I would love to see how he gets along with the rest of the New mutants. and I wonder what code name you're going to give him. and with the possiblities of his mind controling powers. you could a lot of wild things with them. well since Professor and Jean are great with telepathy and Telekenis. i'm leaning toward Astral projection and Sight, just for a change of pace. i would love to see what you think of. and since you're thinking of spider-man with the x-men you could do the usual: have Spider-man and X-men have a common enemy to fight. some of the best stories between spider-man the x-men was their team ups (the team up they did against Professor Power was great Warren was Archangel at the time and Jean Grey was just calling herself by her name, the conversation alone between Hank and Spider-man on how to stop Prof.Power's flying headquarters was funny especially how the rest of the x-men reacted) keep it up i would love to see who you have jesse be interested in. For a wild idea, how about you have Jesse interested in Wanda. cna you imagine the stuff they have in common and they're both powerful. it's just a wild idea. keep it up. and i'll keep reading
JB 2005-02-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI would love to be beta reader for you but I don't know what a beta reader is and you would have to wait for me to get my e-mail up and running
Daniel Lynx 2005-01-11 ch 2,	abuseI'm glad you updated this I got real interested in this with the first chapter, and this was good as well, I wonder what weapons he'll consider in his practices, I'm more directed towards blades personally but it your fic so you can do whatever you like, I get the feeling you plan on making Jesse pair up with Rogue, if so then that's cool I like to see created characters get paired with her, especially since this one is a powerful physic, and I am also curious if he'll be able to create weapons out of his physic powers, and what else he could doI hope you update this again sometime soon cause I want to see where this goes and what will he do when he encounters the Brotherhood and others
evil-kenshin 2005-01-11 ch 2,	abusegreat fanfic so far, update soon
gaul1 2004-09-25 ch 1,	abuseinteresting, byes
Wanderer3 2004-09-25 ch 1,	abusehey there! Interesting idea. THIS Jesse remindsme of Xavier's comic son Legion. Multiple personalities, multiple psionic powers, but when working in tangent with the others he's a force to be reckoned with. Oh and if no one's told you yet the little girl's name is X-23...that's it. she was a weapon, no name, no family, no emotion, at least that's what they were shooting for when they made her. And I think she's getting her own comic or somethin...not sure though. Later. PS what about your Power Rangers fics? Atlantean Warriors and Power Rangers/Motu cross...what's up with them?

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