very very hot

Nice that was a great fic, i've been stuck on my own fic for awhile and this helped so thank you lodes _ you style of writeing is brill.

Ruthless, that's how Pyro should be. Unrelenting, dominating and definite fiery.

wot! now thats what im talkin about pure iceman bobby action. hah i knew bobby was a uke. hey shut up lizzy sorry dont mind that sentance my friend is sharing a computer with me and she is a complete perv. any way i beg to differ pyro is the uke. kick ass story dude. any way if you reply can you tell me who's a better uke. i say pyro and my friend lizzy say's iceman. (bobby is the seme. there is no way bobby would let john take him. bobby is an inner freak after all. beside's john remin'd me to much of a girl anyway) SEXIST SEXIST. argh damn you woman stop that. how can i be a sexist if im a guy... YOUR NOT A GUY UR A GIRL IN A MAN'S BODY. YOUR A FEMINIST. there is nothing wrong with beleivibg that men are sleeze's who disrespect woman. i mean all the guy's that hit on you how disrespectful. and they kiss there mom with that mouth... WELL FOR ONE IM WELL AWARE AND AM GRATEFUL FOR UR UM WHATEVER IT IS AND TWO IM SORRY YOUR NOT LIKE MOST GUY'S WITCH COME TO THE TERM WOMAN IN A MALE'S BODY. WHAT GUY SAY'S ALL GUY'S ARE SLEEZE'S OH AND BY THE WAY YOU KISS YOUR MOTHER WITH YOUR MOUTH AND... shuddup well se ya please dont mind my friend she keep's pushing me from my own computer. DAMN RIGHT THAT WHAT YOU GET SISSY BOY. WELL MY SELF RIGHTOUS FEMINIST GAY ASS FRIEND WILL TALK TO YOU LATER NO DOUBT TO APOLOGIZE FOR ME. I MADE HIS NOSE BLEED CUASE I KICKED HIM SO I GOTTA GO BE THE SORRY FRIEND. WELL ANYT WAY GOOD STORY. I LOVE THE LEMON HOPE TO SEE MORE...

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aw...beautiful! with hot boy touching too! w0t...doesn't get much better!

Hehe. Cute fic. I like the end. "My turn".

aww... this was sweet. at first i thought this was going to be some sappy, surrealy love-type story, but then i read that last line and i laughed. nice ending... *evil smile* very good fic for a "first timer"

Mmn... Yum. ;)

Very, very good. Catchy ending. Lol. Yes, they were very in character, actually, and I think you should write more- if not on this fic, than on another. Good job! :)

I love you, B.A. I don't know why you don't write more often b/c you need to. I love this story. It's great, and yes your Bobby and John are in character. Write some more (which I will make you do!)!

Now it's my turn to whisper about you!

Orli