 Thiaf 11/28/05 . chapter 7YAY! Update! And cliffy too! I want to see more of this mystery stuff.
One last thing, I think that is Voltaire's Japanese name.
Anyway, keep writing, I'm loving it all and update as soon as you can! |
 Golden Lunar Eclipse 11/2/05 . chapter 6Ou, ah, Rei and Kai no get along...
Good job! I love the setting (time, place, etc), it's just so exciting. And the attention to detail and description, as usual. I think it's great. I love the friendship bit where Max and Rei reveal themselves, and of course the line at the end: "Yes, but even a samurai doesn’t kill as much as you have. Not even in their whole lives and you’re still so young"... I feel like a lot of this is a focus on Kai, what decision will he make, will he be saved, will he ever learn that lesson... ok, that doesn't really make much sense, but it does to me, if that makes sense... maybe I should stop talking now... Kai is your bishi after all... heh...
Anyways, I'll let you work on your own things, I just wanted you to read once through quickly my stuff before I post it, to make sure it's fluent and works, you don't have to give me full out reviews, or even correct the grammar, I just want to know if it's postable or not... since you are on a roll with your stuff, go with it, but I know you'll take some time off at some point to surf the net, msn, or go to DA or DPOF, so pretty, pretty please do a quick run-through?
Thanks! And great job on this. You do write excellently. Keep on with your inspirational flow now, but don't forget to study, eat properly, or get enough sleep. I care about you. Talk to you later. Love ya! |