Man, I really do think that if Kratos had seen Lloyd die, there really wouldn't have been any other reason for him to continue to live at all. If this was how the game really was, I don't think I could have played it to its end, haha! It's too angsty and sad, but I guess that's why I enjoyed it!

You killed Lloyd! You bastard! Ahem. That can't be it, can it? Don't leave poor Sheena all alone! On to chapter 14!

You really enjoy torturing Lloyd and Colette, don't you? Oh well, on to chapter 13!

O.O Yuan is gonna die? -gets all teary eyed- Strangely, I like Raphael as an antagonist. His cold and murderous intentions and demeanor really makes for an incredible villain. He's pretty cool! On to chapter 12!

Ep! There's a lot of organs and blood being splashed and tossed about, I've noticed. I love the incantation for Final Judgement, that was awesome! On to chapter 11!

Dun, dun DUN! Lloyd is Zelos' bud! It's only natural that he would be worried about him, especially in a condition like this. Seems like Lloyd's condition is only getting worse. Poor Lloyd :/

Nice chapter. I have a tendency to go 'ew' when Author's notes are placed in the story itself. I usually just place them at the beginning and then the end, so that it doesn' distract the reader. On to chapter 4!

It's looking pretty hopeless for Lloyd, on to chapter 3!

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

wait, I don't have fitting music!
Hang on .. sad .. Ok, "Eternal Snow"!
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*gets misty eyes from end of 1st paragraph*
Waha ..
*ignores the whole Kraine stuff*

I .. am ALMOST crying .. wait .. wait .. nope. Just wet eyes. Sorry.

C-A

Wohe, I first thought "omg, what if someone else (or even a guy) is gonna be chosen for Lloyd?" but it was Shihna after all. ^^
And actually .. that makes sense, since she DID go with him on the Journey. You know, beginning of your own story XD

I laughed so hard at the part where Kratos became a peeping tom .. those TALKS .. Ahaha, it was so funny I had to act/speak it out loud XD

C-A

P.S: Your bloody story (literally) is even worse than the worst Caught in the middle of the paths that I could ever imagine ..

Damn you damn you DAMN YOU IN TO HELL! THAT SUCKS MAN ,-.-,(sniff,sniff...bawling)WHY DID Lloyd have to die?!?!?

same thing 4 me but i thought it a little before you go to tethayalla

A rahter angsty, but also cute story. That ending just made me so sad, though I liked the main ending more than the alternate one you wrote later. I think I'll skip of to your profile now and see what else you got there ^^

Me, I just switched the hair. "Oh, MANA! He looks like a 12-year-old Kratos!" Yeah, my personal opinion is that Lloyd looks 12, Colette looks 12 as well, and Genis looks nine. I haven't figured any one else yet, but I THINK Presea looks 7 or 8.