Aww. Cloud was completely in character, you even did his little way of talking pretty well. You know what I mean. I don't know what it's called. Is it dialect?

I must say, I'm surprised. Maybe you should do this more often, Alan, this is a really nice story.

lol, it was a pleasure to preview this fic i enjoyed beta reading one of your works, it's kinda funny but around the same time you posted this the song "Gray Sky Morning" became popular up here in vermont...the radio stations play it like 6 times a day.

A great serious fic here, i'd encourage you to do more but i don't want to take away from your humor, but nevertheless this is an excellent contribution to the ff7 section, keep up the great work