So poetic! And so wonderfully worrisome!
I just loved the suspenseful feeling, or rather when the suspenseful feeling ends and a happy conclusion revealed...Like you did here.
Rain lives! Yeah-ness!
Anyhoo. I truly loved how the story and Domon's feelings were told in poem like form. It's quite unique in this section, and you wrote it talent. I truly felt for that boy.
Great fic, keep up the fabulous writing!

I was pretty impressed with this one. :)

To be honest, this is the kind of writing I truly enjoy reading. Great work.

Cheers,
-Mana

Beautiful.

My first review was meant to be here--chap. 2, but I'm glad I somehow left it for Chap. 1 because I forgot to say just what I liked, so I'll leave it here. (I think I just confused myself-LOL!)

I enjoyed reading where Domon's bandanna was found whenever he couldn't remember taking it off.

So lost he was when he thought he lost his love. How releived he was when he realized he could live again. Your description of his feelings were wonderful.

You have such a one in a million way of telling a story, Jess. God bless you.

As usual your gift was obvious in this as it is in all of your fics.

I love every single one of your G Gundam writings from your first, "King of Hearts", to this one.

I hope something eventually pops up in your head for more on G Gundam because future work here from you is wanted by so many.

Thanks for all of your wonderful fics, Jess.

Fabulous. I got emotional even on my third time through. I’m sorry that this is your final G Gundam fic; you are definitely one of the few who can really write.

Wow... absolutely beautiful. It kind of reminded me to a lesser extent of La Vita e Bella, because the first part is so sweet and cute, and then it gets all angsty and sad and you're like "No! Go back to the beginning!" But then I saw the happy ending (I think?)... so... yay :D

I'm really sad to see you go; it won't be the same without your fics... I hope that you'll still contribute every now and then. But it was great having you around, and your stories are always welcome here ^^

Beautifully emotive as is all your work--I'm sorry to hear of your departure and only hope that it is only of G-Gundam stories--I want very much to read future works of yours regardless of where they are.

This was good. I'm sorry to hear about your writing, but I am glad that you gave us this piece as your last.