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  Yuen-chan 10/2/04 . chapter 1 Aie, I've never read a lot of Shika/Naru, but I like how you do this. Update soon, if you will. |
 tir-synni 10/1/04 . chapter 1While parts of the fic was slightly confusing, I fell in love with your take on the ?/Naruto pairings anyway. Besides, a good ShikaNaru is so hard to come by! Please continue. |
| Yasuhiro 9/28/04 . chapter 1 This is great. its very well written I really like it. You managed to make it believable and ...not cheezy while still being heartwarming :0! I salute you! -salutes- You are trully a great writter. |
| WaterBookLover 9/26/04 . chapter 1 More parts! More parts! Must... have... more... ShikaNaru! Please? Pretty please? |
| Emo Fox 9/26/04 . chapter 1 Waii Sounds like a very good start so far. I do hope you continue this. Murr, stupid Sasuke being a jerk to Naruto ... Like all the other guys i guess. 'cept glad Shika is there to cheer him up. Not one of my fav pairings, but the way this was written and how to began to get them to awknowledge eachother was very nice. So! I am very much looking forward to more. Please continue ... i wanna see what happens. 3 ... Hehe. Shika x Naru forever - LDO |
| sunhawk 9/26/04 . chapter 1 This is cute. The reflective Shika is nice and I've always liked Shikanaru or Narushika. Hope to see more. :) |
| sunhawk 9/26/04 . chapter 1 This is cute. The reflective Shika is nice and I've always liked Shikanaru or Narushika. Hope to see more. :) |
| CrystalShiva 9/26/04 . chapter 1 Oh Please Keep Going Shikamaru & Naruto really need more time together and you are one of the few people who seem to be able to do Shikamaru justice! |
| Luna 9/26/04 . chapter 1 Continue!Damn there's not enough Shikamaru/Naruto around!Make more!Or else I'll hunt you down! |
| Uno 9/26/04 . chapter 1 hey, write more, i really liked this and wann see what happens next! |
| 7thcircleofhell 9/26/04 . chapter 1 AW! Hey PLEASE continue! I generaly don't like this pairing, but you're doing a really good job at it. PLEASE update soon! - |
| lovely baa baa 9/25/04 . chapter 1 *claps* That was good! In answer to your question about turning the story into a multi-chapter...no, please don't. I think it's perfect as a one shot. Now, a sequal maybe, (aka a sperate fanfic) delving deeper into the relationship Naruto has/had with Sasuke might work. Or, a sequal, looking at how the relationship Shikamaru wants to start with Naruto would work out...yes that would be very nice to see. In fact I vote for that. But please leave this fic as a one shot. I think it's beautiful the way it is. |
| monmon 9/25/04 . chapter 1 Most interesting... write more! |
| risuchan 9/25/04 . chapter 1 MORE! this rocks my socks! i love shikamaru/naruto! |
| SpiritGoddess 9/25/04 . chapter 1 Wow! This is really good! I love Naruto/Shikamaru! I love how you wrote it and to be honest I didn't find Naruto ooc. Please update more! I can't wait for it to come out! - |
