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| hel 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou really need to continue the one. its a great story |
| jw 2005-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story hope for update soon |
| OmgitsBlondieduh 2005-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseEr...I have to say that that wasnt a very good beginning. Number one, it needed to be much longer than that. Number two, it was slightly confusing. Because of the bad start, it made me not want to go onto the next chapter. Remember, that, the very first chapter has to catch the reader's attention and not make it boring. Please, in the future keep that in mind. I hope you take my suggestions in mind, thank you. ~ Mai ~ |
| Lorency 2005-05-16 ch 4, | abuseIt's so sweet. When will the next chapter come and how will Clark react? peace out |
| Kate 2005-05-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseAny chance you might elaborate on this more? Make it a full-length story and explain how Faith ended up in Boston and how she is the Kent's daughter? |
| goddessa39 2005-05-14 ch 4, | abuseSweet! But her bor (right?) is looking kinda disturbed and confused. Reminds me of how Faith acted towards Buffy. Are you gonna bring Faith's parents 'into the fold' where they will know about the supernatural and that Faith is one of the current alpha Slayers? Continue! And, you know what would be cool? If you would make it B/A and F/S where they're lal close and friendly. Of course, teh guys could still hate each other... BA ALWAYS! Don'chya just love Faith/Buffy friendship?! Continue!! |
| Mae 2005-05-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love this story. Wonder how the family will react to two super powered children. |
| Sabriel 2005-04-13 ch 3, anon. | abusei like this it shows a soft side to faith that she really needs. I like the idea that the kents are her parnets and can't wait to see what you do with it. |
| Lorency 2005-04-12 ch 3, | abuseNo! Can't stop this here. What happens next? Will Faith meet her mom? Peace out |
| Tituba 2005-04-11 ch 3, | abuseO, I like this, the chapters could be longer, but i like it, write more soon. "Luv ya like a fat kid luv cake" ~Katherine Elizabeth |
| Katie 2005-04-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseAny chance that you're going to make this into a full blown story? I'm guessing that Faith is actually a Kent? These drabbles are really interesting, but I really, really think this would make an awesome story. Please? |
| goddessa39 2005-04-10 ch 3, | abuse...well, glad you continued. Although, I am a more Buffy-centric person. Can you give it a little B/A background then, and then move on to full Faith? |
| Faith's Lies 2005-04-10 ch 3, | abuseTiss very good, ish likes. There's a bit of confusion for me, but I think that's all the better in this kind of story. I do wish you would make this logner or update faster, but I know it can take a while to get stuff out but... please? |
| glitzydancingshoes 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseI really like Faith's thoughts, and would really like to see the rest of this. Looks like it's going to be good. |
| cilou 2004-12-12 ch 2, anon. | abusemy god, you con't let it like that, u so have to update soon! ^_~ |