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| Soulless Warlock 2005-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseNot gonna cry, not gonna cry, not gonna cry. Wha! Good, good stuff |
| Raining Blood Red Moon 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWOW! that's all i can really say about this. you are a really good author. you should write more angel and cordelia stories i know that they would be excellent just like this one is. |
| VampSlayer04 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abuseAw. Poor sad Angel. The end of "You're Welcome" had me almost in tears, which is big for me. I don't normally cry at these type things. In fact, the only other one of these shows made me cry was during "The Body" just because it was so true to the experience of losing someone you love. I would love to see some more of this story, mostly because I think the ending leaves it kinda open, especially since Buffy is there. I think you should explain why she's there after she told Angel(through Andrew) that she thought he was evil. Also, did any of the Sunnydale people even know that Cordy was dead? Just my thoughts. Thanks for such a good story. |
| Skycross 2004-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like your story: I think it's in the spirit of Angel TV Show. You're a good Writer! |
| SpikesSweetie 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseIt's very well written and uncanny how Harm's words were so close to the real one's but you're right; it's definitely something Harmony would say. |
| AbiSnocom 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseTHIS STORY ALMOST GOT ME CRYING...BUT I LOVED IT...IT WAS VERY GOOD. ; ) |
| Jenifire 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved the fic. It made me cry more than i did when i saw the eppi when she died. |
| TDWidow 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseAww...that's a gorgeous story. I wrote one similar called "I Understand" if you want to go read it. The first part is Xander's reaction to her death (as I'm a C/X shipper) and the second part is the funeral. (I'm not above shameless plugs, lol) Very touching and I love the homage to "Forever" |
| Tariq 2004-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. Very Nice. Write More Soon! |
| Tariq 2004-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. Very Nice. Write More Soon! |
| cc 2004-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was beautiful. The way they should have written it. I have a lump in my throat. Great job! |
| ipio 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseYeah...some of these words made me cry.. The first time I heard them. You basically put together pieces of dialogue from Angel episodes. About 15% of this story is your own work. It’s fine to quote angel episodes, but borrowed dialogue should never outweigh your original writing. |
| Omar Mahmood 2004-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story, its kinda how I imagined it to be done, very well done |
| Back to Front 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseAhh, so sweet! Just how I always thought it show happen, keep writting |