Great story. I love Nightwish, so the song was an incredible choice. Good work!

Oh, that's so sad!! But so good! Great writing, you're very good at it!

wow... that was depressing in a very good way! i liked it! ^^

*sniff*sniff*sniffle*...sad..*sniff*...poor Raven...dang it...you mad me cry...*sniff*
Your a good poet...*sob*...

damn you.. you made me cry. again. quit making raven die because of these sad thoughts!

This was great... I didn’t think it would end like that...I loved your vivid descriptions of everything... I loved the words you chose...it was great...

Can’t say I’ve ever heard of Nightwish before, but those lyrics fit beautifully in with the story. I didn’t see the ending coming either, but it worked well. Really good job.

I loved it... but the end was kind of EH, if you know what I mean. ;) I think you should've just had Raven comit suicide and die in BB's arms...

How sad! I love it when a charater dies. Well, if it's a nice meaningful death like yours. Not that I want Raven to die... Anyway, great story!

Raven and Nightwish! good choice!

*Blink*Blink*Blink*
Wow.

That was so deep, so true to Raven's overall charater, and the song fit so well. That was, to put it simply, wow.

Wow, I've yet to come across someone else who likes Nightwish (or has even heard of them), until now. Great story, wonderful job integrating the lyrics of the song. It was all very introspective and written quite maturely. The last sentence was a perfect closure for the story. Again, great job. Keep Writing.