 Fantasyfan4ever 5/28/09 . chapter 17*giggles* One of the best Mario fics ever! I had such a blast reading this. Daisy is one of my favorite characters out of the franchise; she may be a princess, but she's never afraid to show her tough side. We have so much in common! I loved how the mystery got developed through the fic; nice job! Aw, I just adore Luigi vs. Daisy; they are so different from one another, but that's what makes them so compatible! Lovely job once again! |
 GamerLioness 12/7/06 . chapter 17Fantastic ending! I read this entire story in one sitting! It took a while, but it was worth it! I commend you on your efforts and success! Woo, lots of exclamation points! Okay, I'll stop now... |
 GamerLioness 12/7/06 . chapter 9I've already read up to this spot in one sitting, because I really love the concept of this story! I can relate to Daisy in the sense that I'm a bit hooked on Horoscopes as well (I'm a Leo,) and I tend to get jealous of others who are more well-known than me.
I love how you depict the characters and give them strong personalities, and this story even has some nice humor! I actually laughed out loud at the part where Goombro recited his poem on stage. Wow, I really am a lot like Daisy, aren't I? The only critique I have for you is that I find it a bit odd how you've centered the text, but it's still legible, so it's not much of a problem.
Overall, great job! I'm really enjoying this! |
 Thoughtless7 1/6/06 . chapter 17Hey! Sorry I didn't review other chappies; I had to read the last chappie first. Anyway, IT'S SO AWESOME! Maybe you could make a sequel? *shiny eyes* |
 Thoughtless7 1/3/06 . chapter 5Cutest Couple! Got to read next chappie! You've got me hooked. |
 Thoughtless7 1/3/06 . chapter 4Oh...I want read next chappie good chappie bye! |
 Thoughtless7 1/3/06 . chapter 3SPIDER-LEGS! That's perfect! I always called him 'weirdo bastard dude.' |
 Thoughtless7 1/3/06 . chapter 2Peachy Peachy Peachy...and now I am obsessed with that word. _ Good chappie. Peachy Peachy... |
 Thoughtless7 1/3/06 . chapter 1Cool prologue. Now let me say...FINALLY! Someone besides me knows Daisy is not Peach's sister but her cousin. I read on! |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 17 Sweet! I loved this |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 16 Great. Thank you. Wow cool neat great |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 15 Fantastic |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 14 It's great |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 13 Wonderful wonderful wonderful hahaha |
 James Birdsong 12/27/05 . chapter 12 Awesome awesome awesome |