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| Hizzy-8945 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuseIntresting, but I think the other was better. |
| Sapphire Gardevoir and Star... 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's good, a little short but hey mine are too. Read mine it's called Unfazed. From what you say your interested in I think you'll like it. |
| Raichu 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseMore punchy. The ending has much more impact than the earlier version. |
| Dannichu 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseVery different to the other one. I personally prefered the first one, since it had all the emotions and feelings, as well as discriptions, but this version didn't leave anything out, it was merely compressed. I still prefer the first one, but I just LOVE the ending to this version. |
| EM-D8 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this is an interesting way of writing this... I did enjoy it, though personally I prefered the old version. But that could be just me. |