Adorable and a little sad at the same time...Naruto seems like a good father...^-^

I like the way you worded this story. . .it's refreshing and reminiscent of kids stories I was read a long time ago. Very declarative, and with limited dialogue. Interesting style in fanfiction!

The little girl's identity confuses me, but I'd like to think she's Naruto's sweet and darling daughter. Oh, Naruto tells her stories about his friends and growing up! I like it. I think all parents tell their kids stories about themselves as kids-- I remember begging my mom to tell certain stories again and again.

Nice short story! Very accessible to the reader. Short and sweet. ^_^

That was really cute. Good job! ^_^

Oh, wow! Someone actually wrote it! ^_^ Good for you!

I really liked this. Was it Naruto's kid that you were writing this as?

Either way, it's still good! ^_^ *is honored that someone actually answered her challenge*

oh, i really liked it. very nice. i would like to here more from her, too, so you should write more!

I mean, wow. This is amazing.

I'm guessing the dad is Naruto, but who is the mom? Really sweet little girl here, reminds me of when my parents used to tuck me in to bed at night.