I really like the story was a bit surprised that it was not finished. This is the first time I used this site but will be back to check on the ending. Good job, you have great suspense going.

Dang it. I'm Canadian too, but I took Japanese:) I knew I'd screwed that one up somehow. Thanks for the tip!

Just one sticky point. When Marianne says goodbye to Leo she told him "Bien venue" au revoir is the usual goodbye. Bienvenue is welcome. Otherwise a very well-written story. And I'm Canadian so I like the fact that it's predominantly been a Canadian story so far. Keep writing because I want to keep reading!

Still too early in the story to comment on the plot. Please continue, I want to see where this story goes.

The plot is becoming a little clearer. Keep going.

Seems extremely interesting. . . one little teensy weensy problem, I don't think Leo would be making comments about his prostate like that. But other than that, this is absolutely exceptional, and I'm waiting eagerly for the next part. Good job, and I hope you post more soon.

I don't know what the story is about yet but it is well written. I would need to read another chapter or two in order to say more.