I absolutely love the running insults/banter between Ian and River! It's so perfectly young macho male B.S.!

Another really great story!

“Go get some clothes on before you catch a cold.” He called as the engine roared to life.

“Okay, mom.”

“Smart ass.”

Loved it! keep them coming!

wow nice story, i liked the fatherly presence, or Jaffer, grins. good story

cool

liked it

vamp

Hmm, I'm not sure Shawn would have let Brooks let it be openly known that Jack is his Dad, although I'm looking forward to what happens as everyone gets to know.

I assume the various mysteries brought up by this one will be covered in the following stories so I'll just kepp on reading

It was just positively wonderful. As are all your other stories... campers! or no.

I knew he would call Dotty into it. Yeah, I love being right :)

This story is so great! You've got me up past midnight when I have to wake up at 6 in the morning for school! Not a lot can do that...

Yes! I was waiting for that! Get her Jaffer!

Oh know, Brooks and his big, fat mouth!

And, protective Jaffer is going to show Xara off! Awesome. Can't wait for it.

Ooh... Xara is in for it now- Jaffer's going to Dotty!

Ooh... Xara needs to mind her own buisness, before she gets into trouble!

Ha, I knew there was a good reason for Ian's dirty vocabulary!

Well- I guess if we're gonna have Ian in a story we'd better prepare for his mouth, huh?

Nonetheless, it's just great. On to read more!

Xara is back... grr!

This should be interesting.

Already got me hooked...

i love this story...