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Chewie Cookies 4/19/12 . chapter 2
Very nice! I liked that two-shot a lot!

Keep up the good work!
silver dagger 11/6/11 . chapter 2
OMG! That was just Amazing! I thought it was so funny how she thought they had sex! I mean so did I but that don't mean anything. Anyhow CONGRATS ON A GOOD STORY!
Mishi Nagano 5/3/11 . chapter 2
next chapter? soon i hope
Kyuubidude 3/27/11 . chapter 1
I hate to say this about any Naruhina story, but this was awful! It completely takes the tension and drama away from the way Naruto is portrayed to be completely oblivious to love, and that Hinata is supposed to still be that shy girl. I know they've grown up, but in the anime and manga, even, they are still Naruto and Hinata. Here, you make everything sound like they're both loose, and you make it seem like Hinata enjoys getting drunk. I mean, its hard to describe really, but in my mind, this doesn't resemble the two in any way except for the names. sorry dude.
myth buster 10/27/10 . chapter 1
Immunity to poison- figures this is one of the benefits to being a Jinchuriki.
preettygabbysz 5/23/10 . chapter 2
omg i loved it
sexy hinata16 12/31/09 . chapter 2
this is hilarious
liTTlE-MisS-trOuBleSomE 11/12/09 . chapter 1
LoL

I love this story!

It was my first ever fanfiction story that i read and it's what got me started on fanfiction and writing it! I still do love this story!
kiubi123 7/11/09 . chapter 2
make more chapters as soon as possibule (sp?)
DragonoftheEastblue 4/25/09 . chapter 2
very nice, very nice indeed.
IMORTAL DARKNESS 4/15/09 . chapter 2
nice
KoiGirlPGSM 3/6/09 . chapter 2
cool
MuSiC HaTs 2/14/09 . chapter 2
Please.

please, please, PLEASE update. Don't tell me that you gave up on this story!I really really REALLY hope that you didn't, and you're just taking a REALLY LONG VACATION.

PLEASE. UPDATE. Or I'll be the saddest person on the face of the earth.
minami016 2/11/09 . chapter 1
“Naruto-kun. Naked. No puke.”

OMG thats the funniest thing i have ever read!

great story...
NoName 1/4/09 . chapter 1
i hate you continue this or put it on adoption i hate you
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