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..if they felt great pity on killua, i feel greater pity on him.

.awts.Gon was like his very first best best friend..


.. it was good story though it has a sad ending..

.. it was very touching.. maybe not to someone who doesn't have a single clue on hunter x hunter (if there's any) hehe. but to consider that they've gone to so many hardships..

..haixt..

wah!! T_T You made me cry... *sob*

I forced myself not to cry while reading this, I'm in the office for gawd's sake! *gritting my teeth*

It's so hard to fight tears to fall, huhuhu!!

It's so, so sad..why Gon?? =(

However, it's good... =)

JhayLhen_09

well, it's actually good, and sad...
just one comment: Leorio is trying to become a doctor, he would never ignore what are the results of cancer. it would be better to switch the roles, in order to let Leorio explain that to their friends, and talking about gon's chances in spite of being kurapika or the other doctor.

but, besides this, it's sad! my POOR LITTLE LOVELY GON!!

i am writing with tears in my eyes i cant see the letters on my keyboard this so sad.

Sad, well written stories make me cry.

I cried.

I was hoping to see some more distinctive Gon/Killua or something, but this was fine. Your story is very close to what the real series is like-- I can't complain about the characters being OOC at all... except, maybe for Leorio? Well, he wasn't OOC, but with all his medical studies, I was hoping he could have helped the situation, perhaps by noticing Gon's condition, or have had the semi "doctor-mode" all along.

All in all, great fic!! *Adds to faves*.

Hi.
I've cried.
At this moment I also cry. I wanted to cry.
Thank you very much for this story.
I have search for something like this. I love it really.
Still there are points that could be better (so Leorio want to be a doctor but here Kurapika explain the illness ...) but at all it's really good.
But ok for a fan it's really hard to see a beloved character to die. (sorry for my english ^^'). Better they don't die also in our fantasy.
Nevertheless, I love it when my heart is shaking with the story.
Thanks for your good work and uploading here.
Can I hope for more?

I love Killua the most, also Gon and their pairing. I wanted you to know this. I also love all the character in HxH.
Togashi-sensei, doumo arigatou gozaimasu.

My, it's so sad. I really enjoy it though. It almost made me cry.

cool story...i like it.very nice...im practically speechless.^_~ hm...well, 'tis great...:D

sayonara.

I must say that I go for PaleBlue's comment. Switching tenses really confuses. Keep trying, though, you'll be able to make great stories, I'm sure of it.

Not all angst stories have to include the scene when someone dies. You know, I've read this really good angst story that nearly made me cry, even though I *can't* cry. It doesn't tell the time when the person dies, but it really *is* angsty.

Well, I guess experiencing it is better than being told, no? I suggest you to read the story, even if you happen to not know the characters. It's "A Present for A Friend" made by SIB.

Keep on the good work, remember what I said, "Strive for Glory"! XD

That was very good. A sad tale, but I agree with you, not everthing should be all happy-ending stuff. Excellent story! I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends! ^_^ Please continue writing!

It was so sad... so sad. But somehow also very good in a weird way. How the story went on. But it was kind of cruel... to Killua I mean. But a good story.

hello. how are you? i just wanna tell you that i'm from bahrain(arad)i'm 18 years old. i want to know your age and where are you from. are you male or female?

First of all, remember to stick to the same tense. Whether you want to use past or present is up to you, but I strongly recommend using past tense. Never switch tense in the middle of a sentence (except in dialogue, of course), it confuses the reader.
Secondly, have you forgotten that Leorio is studying to become a doctor? Kurapika may be educated, but I doubt he'd have to explain what cancer is to a medical student. The desire to become a doctor is a very important part of Leorio's character.

very col but can you continu the fiction and please enter hisoka in this sory please

aww gon possibly dying? that's unthinkable..don't let him die ok?