Continue this is awesome!

Thats a really good chapter, even tho it is short

Hope you can figure out what happens next, tho i dont want Rebeckah or Shafan to die. Haven fin and hope you can post the next chater soon D

What happened there..shafn drown

or something hope so more action that

way, cliffhangers are good by the way.

**update

Hey dude, this is looking really good so far! :P keep writing

xoxo

This chapter rocks blood, acciedent murder,

betryal, fights...great reminds me of a

''novela'' (spanish) iam not confused anymore..i think.. have a HAPPY NEW YEARS!2005

hello...i want to read more...more...MORE!...lol...good luck anyways

...have fun overseas...

I really liked this, It was very nice!.

WOW ems! Best one yet. Hope you get more chapters up once you come back from overseas, the story is really really good. Kepp it up!

good stuff there ems. its even better than you telling us about it. hope you can post the next chapter soon.

Well Little Kitty great now there is more drama luv when u killed off den no offense but every writer always must sacrafice characters for drama to rise hop the writer block leaves SOON!*

Oh...interesting indeed. Shafan's reaction, what will it be? I cant wait to find out. Sorri I didnt review ch2 earlier i musta missed the memo

Well here I go reviewing again, this is getting to be a habit...hm...keep going

In the next chap u'll need to explain some of this cause I'm pretty lost!. Other than that, this was the best chap in the whole story.

hey its me again your story is really, really good emily! can't wait for the next chapter! luv the suspence! bye!

hi emily thought i read ch1 and give it a reveiw .

its a good start and dont worry i won't sue you!

i like the suspensful bits