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Mechagodzilla128 6/13/10 . chapter 1
I think it's a Salamance, but not really sure. This poem reminds me that all beings are different, and you cannot expect a group to all be the same. Good job with the poem, I feel it was done well.
Meghan 1/2/08 . chapter 1
I don't get it :P

o.K, maybe I do. It does not want to fly. But It could have just hovered to prevent from DYING. But pretty good. I give it a thumbs up.
Windfinder 9/5/07 . chapter 1
This is a really good poem. Do you write a lot of poetry?
Hayumi 6/6/07 . chapter 1
I say your good at ryme sceam, and your poetry is better then ,ine ever will, and pretty exciting too.
solos 11/10/06 . chapter 1
is it blaziken the eagle
Ridley's guardian 1/6/05 . chapter 1
Wow, thats pretty good! Have you done any other poems?
Xirevius 9/29/04 . chapter 1
Bagons dream of flying and so they jumped off cliffs and developed a hard head because of that. I feel sorry that a Salamence would not dream of flying but all Pokemon are born different.

I would have thought Salamence too, since the only other Dragons are Dratini evolutions, Kingdra, Latios and Latias, Flygon, Bagon evolutions and Rayquaza.
Dannichu 9/29/04 . chapter 1
The rhythm in this is really good, and the rhyming and repetion was great (I love poems that rhyme!), and the actual story was very good, though I didn't like the ending. I didn't like the ending, but that was only because I don't like death, not because it was written badly.

A Salamence who was afraid to fly? Imagine such a thing... :knowing wink:
raichu 9/28/04 . chapter 1
Yeah, a sad one.
happyham 9/27/04 . chapter 1
sad. me now unhappyham. oh, well, good peom,

is it flygon?
nightdragon0 9/27/04 . chapter 1
Nice read, though it's a sad end for the dragon. Hm...I'm guessing Salamance perhaps...
V. Cristina 9/26/04 . chapter 1
Nice...sad, yes...but still, It is god!
Lunar Sphinx 9/26/04 . chapter 1
That is so sad. I'm glad I saved the BTM chapter for last.
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