 Mechagodzilla128 6/13/10 . chapter 1I think it's a Salamance, but not really sure. This poem reminds me that all beings are different, and you cannot expect a group to all be the same. Good job with the poem, I feel it was done well. |
 Meghan 1/2/08 . chapter 1 I don't get it :P
o.K, maybe I do. It does not want to fly. But It could have just hovered to prevent from DYING. But pretty good. I give it a thumbs up. |
 Windfinder 9/5/07 . chapter 1 This is a really good poem. Do you write a lot of poetry? |
 Hayumi 6/6/07 . chapter 1 I say your good at ryme sceam, and your poetry is better then ,ine ever will, and pretty exciting too. |
 solos 11/10/06 . chapter 1 is it blaziken the eagle |
 Ridley's guardian 1/6/05 . chapter 1Wow, thats pretty good! Have you done any other poems? |
 Xirevius 9/29/04 . chapter 1Bagons dream of flying and so they jumped off cliffs and developed a hard head because of that. I feel sorry that a Salamence would not dream of flying but all Pokemon are born different.
I would have thought Salamence too, since the only other Dragons are Dratini evolutions, Kingdra, Latios and Latias, Flygon, Bagon evolutions and Rayquaza. |
 Dannichu 9/29/04 . chapter 1The rhythm in this is really good, and the rhyming and repetion was great (I love poems that rhyme!), and the actual story was very good, though I didn't like the ending. I didn't like the ending, but that was only because I don't like death, not because it was written badly.
A Salamence who was afraid to fly? Imagine such a thing... :knowing wink: |
 raichu 9/28/04 . chapter 1 Yeah, a sad one. |
 happyham 9/27/04 . chapter 1 sad. me now unhappyham. oh, well, good peom,
is it flygon? |
 nightdragon0 9/27/04 . chapter 1Nice read, though it's a sad end for the dragon. Hm...I'm guessing Salamance perhaps... |
 V. Cristina 9/26/04 . chapter 1Nice...sad, yes...but still, It is god! |
 Lunar Sphinx 9/26/04 . chapter 1That is so sad. I'm glad I saved the BTM chapter for last. |