What a sad story. This was nicely done, very nicely done. As much as it was sad, it was good. Once again, a very well done job.

I'm under the impression that you do not intend to pursue this story any further. I hope I'm wrong, this is damn good stuff :(

Well, even as a one-shot, this holds up well. But count mine as a vote for you to continue ^_^

Good idea; I've wondered about Kanako's history. (And your one-shot was funny.)

You know, I'd never thought anyone could write out about one of the mysteries in the Love Hina Universe, particularly Kanako's past. What we only know of her from the Love Hina Again (and from the manga, if I can confirm) that she is Keitaro's adopted sister. Other than that, there's no avaiable info that I know.

Nice outtake, and introduction, in Kanako having questions about her origin. Keep writing!

A wonderfully written piece on one of my favorite characters. It was a nice look into Kanako's thoughts concerning her biological mother. Good job!

Actually, this is a fine title for a very well-written fic. Angst and retrospection filled, it is a nice work and the subject was an interesting topic. Yes, this one is very nice.