This was an awsome first chapter - I had already beaten the Parasite Eve game again on my PS1 about a couple of hours ago today. Write more this was a great read

Oh! Please continue this.

I like it so far.

This is good! Write more soon!

Nice! I'm Probly on my, what thrid or fourth EX game by now, Trust me, Eve is a B*$ to beat now.
Nice way to present it.

PLEASE UPDATE! *whines* I want another chapter to read! - I love this! This is definitly going to my favorites. I like how you discribed Little Eve and Veronica! Being outcasts suck... Anyways please update! You haven't in 3 YEARS!
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Dude, that is so cool, plus i can relate to Veronica. I'm homeschooled so i don't go to school, but i'm the lively freindly type & i started going to church weekly to sing in the choir, you try to make freinds but you can't for whatever reson & your immeadiately an outcast shunned & ignored.

I'm glad that there are others like me in this world.

heh I love your story, I've read it a ton of times, I can't wait for an update. -

YAY! I love this story! Woooo! ::pounce:: I can't wait for the next part -

Hee hee! Wai! This is a great story!

please continue this story, I loved it!

Hehe, told ya I liked it. Get another chapter up pronto! That means now! Or tomorrow. XD

it very nice plsssss wirte the other part plsssssssssssssssssssss

Cool. Sounds alot like Middle school allright. Write more dammit!

continue!