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Caitlin!!
2005-05-04 . chapter 2
hey HEY hey! shockingly enough, i've never read this story before- somewhere along the way i must have gotten lost... but i love it! it helps that i love peter pan and neverland anyway but your story has a PLOT too! amazing! please keep writing it? i want to be a Lost Girl, only one of the prostitute ones...
right...
good luck on AP!
(you must know which Caitlin this is)
Bec
2005-02-28 . chapter 2
I really do love the way you write neighbor. And I absolutely love hte idea of never growing up. I personally never plan to, lol so if you dont want to either then we can go into a mental home together or somewhere where we can be taken care of. Anyways Im so ready for this next chapter. Itd best come soon or Ill start to throw stuff at your window. lol or not, maybe Ill just have you make it up for me.
Bec
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
Email me sometime neighbor! I now have one lol, thanks to an adorably nerdy boyfriend. I do like the mere idea of this chapter and will continue to read on. I think its great that youre 16 and acting like youre 10. Almost reminds me of me, but I know that thats the way you are , dear. So ill continue to read, and you may continue to write these fun stories. You know I love them all.
Stephanie
2004-11-13 . chapter 2
Continue!
The Karlminion
2004-10-22 . chapter 2
Uh... where's the sex?

-=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=-
Isabela Puccini
2004-10-18 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this story so far, except for the title. I had to check the reviews before I read this one, it looked a little "iffy." But now I'm so glad I did! It's such a fantasy and I can TOTALLY relate to everything you're talking about in here! The writing is pretty great, by the way. Keep writing!

-Isabela (But you can call me Izzy)
Pirates-princess
2004-10-13 . chapter 2
hee hee. very good. i didn't want his chapter to end, ubt sadly it did. Thank you so very much for putting this new chapter up, it was very exciting. I cant wait to see what happens next. I didn't know if you were asking for a vote or not but for my 2 cents i just wanted to say Bring It On you Weenies, sounds like a great title...I think it fits this story and the story line better than war. Its more comical, i guess. Man i am really enjoying this story, please post more when ever you can. =) cheese!
SnogginGodess
2004-10-12 . chapter 2
If I were the Lost Boys' mummy, I'd drown them. Yay. Lovely chapter, m'petite.
Carl
2004-10-12 . chapter 2
YES YES YES! I love beating people up! WOO-HOO!
lol. Gotta go, Mum's yelling at me. Tootles!
Crazayladay
2004-10-12 . chapter 2
I like it, the title scared me off a bit but I like it. It's sounds precicly how me and my best friend would be like in Neverland! Of course SHE would be in Peter's Arms. And she'd look at me like I were nuts if I told her I thought "Pirates are sexy" when I look at Captain Hook. *smiles big* Look at Johnny Depp and Orlando Bloom.

I like "Bring it on weenies!" war..is..kind of life less.
Carl
2004-10-11 . chapter 1
I fancy this more each time I read it! he he. I love Peter... ...
HaniDeath
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
Ohh i like this. it is definately worth continuing, i would like to see where you go with this.
Carl
2004-10-01 . chapter 1
YAY! I'm...cool! Woo-hoo. You must continue, and pronto! I wish I was that cool in real life! lol. he he. You must tell me what happens next! Now when I think of Peter Pan I picture Scott, the arrogant little twerp of a soccer player! gr. Jeremy is much better looking. Yay!
Pirates-princess
2004-09-28 . chapter 1
*gives you death stare* this is a WONDERFUL! story...if you don't continue...i'll proabbly come to your house...maybe not. yes this is very good, you must continue. This seemes like an interesting story i hope it is like your zelda story Hero and Friend (*coughHORMONEScough*) which is a very good story i must say to anyone who is reading this review! you are so tallented and i wish i could write stories like you. Please continue. Yay! *skips off*
SnogginGodess
2004-09-27 . chapter 1
Yippee! Oh, Peter is an arrogant little poop. That's why I love him.
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