 Dragolover1 10/16/04 . chapter 11Aww, that's so sweet. Hey, by any chance,is Anasani's baby Drago? Just wanted to know. I'm a big Drago fan. |
 VampireNaomi 10/16/04 . chapter 11It ended already? Darn, I wanted to know more about the demons. Oh well, there's still the sequel...
The romances between the characters were nice, but perhaps a bit fast. A little bit more development would have been great. The last chapter was long, which is natureally good, and I really liked the dream sequence. It was nicely written, and I hope we get too see Anasani's baby in the sequel. |
 Aerith Queen of Cetra 10/14/04 . chapter 10nice chapter!
update soon! |
 Dragolover1 10/13/04 . chapter 10Cool! About time you updated. Don't make us wait for the next chapters, please. Keep it up. |
 Notso Lan 10/11/04 . chapter 8 I loved this chapter and how you made Shendu in love with Anasani. You should continue with that relationship. Hope the rest of the chapters come soon if there is any more. |
 Dragolover1 10/6/04 . chapter 8 Eight demons? Figures. you should have Anasani and Shendu go out. Don't ask me why. Hurry up with chapter 9. |
 RyanL 10/2/04 . chapter 8This is really good! I can't wait for the final! |
 VampireNaomi 10/2/04 . chapter 8Aww, these chapters were really cute. I especially liked the one in which Anasani tickled Jade.
Now that she has found her true form and will probably learn to conrol her powers, I hope that she doesn't forget Jackie, Uncle and her adoptive parents. It will be difficult to keep the balance between her demon and human life.
And... what will Shendu do when he finds out who Nekana is? |
 ThrillerGirl13 10/1/04 . chapter 8I love this story! Please write more! _ |
 Aerith Queen of Cetra 9/30/04 . chapter 7Nice chapter
so uncle did know, hmm.
oh yeah, update soon |
 Aerith Queen of Cetra 9/29/04 . chapter 5Nice chapter!
Update soon! |
 VampireNaomi 9/29/04 . chapter 5Before I say anything else, you might want to do something about this sentence: "The woman was around 5'7" and really slim, but had all the curves in all the right places." There's actually nothing wrong with it and it doesn't bother me at all, but "curves in all the right places" is one of the most common Mary Sue clichés and there are readers who are REALLY picky.
Anasani and Shawn must be the one and the same, eh? It's interesting to find out what she will do to Jade, and how Jade will react to her demon self. So this is going in the Jade/Hsi Wu direction? |
 Aerith Queen of Cetra 9/28/04 . chapter 4I like this story especially about Jade being a demon.
When do Uncle and Jackie find out about what Jade is or do they already know?
Update! |
 VampireNaomi 9/28/04 . chapter 4A fine new chapter. I can't wait to see what Jackie's reaction will be, and I definitely am interested in seeing whether this will be J/HW or J/P. Both are fine with me.
I have one more suggestion; the chapters could be a tad longer. |
 paperpenguin 9/27/04 . chapter 3Interesting take on demons, but I like it! Especially the part about Jade being a demon. Anyway, please continue soon! _ |