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meechums
2005-08-04
ch 4, anon.
abuseWow...I like how this story is going so far. Very romantic (one of the genres I like that I somehow don't find here very much...then again, it could just be that I'm kinda picky about fanfics I like to read ^_^;;) and not that repetitive. I've read your other story at first, "With or Without You", and liked your style of writings...which lead me to read this one. Anyhow, I'm rambling so I'll stop my review here...keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon. ^_^
*michi**
demongoddessYume
2005-04-28
ch 4,
abuseyes, yes i am happy you finally reviewed so that now i can review and we can both be at peace once more. Run on sentance much, eh? but i have to say, i'm slightly confused. there was no mention of the actual song in the chapter, did you know that? and the chapter is really short, as well. can you please explain why? cause i'm really confused *whimpers slightly* oh well, i'll ask you later as well.

Ja, Anu-ue!
Nykki
bubblez4ya
2005-04-03
ch 3,
abuseThat...*sob...was...*sob*..so..*sob*...GOOD! update soon and keep up the good, no GREAT work!
Love, Peace,and Hair Grease,
-Bubblez
ghy
2004-12-15
ch 2, anon.
abusei luv ur story please add another chapter
Kagome4Inu
2004-11-12
ch 1,
abuseNice story! The main reason I came to review was because I realized I never answered you question you sent to one of my stories "Finding True Glamour" and you asked if Inuyasha wears hats during his movies. Yes he does ^.- He's subconcious about his ears, and you'll learn why when I get deeper into the story...but anyways, he always wears hats, or maybe do-rags(sp?) to hide his ears in movies as well. Good question though!!

--Sasami--
miyunay
2004-11-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseAww how sweet hobo i mean hojo is a ** isnt he oh well he is inlove with kagome but she cant return the favor so hojo could rot in hell lol
sesshoumarus-gal
2004-11-10
ch 2,
abuseOh THIS IS So awesome! And i hate boy bands too...gr. but this song was perfect. damn now its in my head...ohh well. i'm off to read your other story...hahe...yup yup. then i'm off to try and make a fic out of a spice girls song. (just cus it sounds like fun) yup ypu awesomeness. c ya

~*~Crystal~*~AKA~*~Sesshoumarus-gal~*~
sesshoumarus-gal
2004-11-06
ch 1,
abuseI know like u posted this a WHILE ago but i just found it on this stie!! AND I LOVE IT! U ROK MY SOX! ANYHO I WANNA SEQUAL! ASAP! THAT MEANS NOW!lol keep writtin...muawh

~*~Crystal~*~AKA~*~Sesshoumarus-gal~*~
Inuyasha'smainsqueaze
2004-11-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseMAKE A SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL ACTUALLY MAKE CHAPTER 2 TO MAKE IT A STORY DAMN IT!
ITKS
2004-10-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseLuv your fic! c ya!

fr.
ITKS
((ileana-the-kikyo-slayer))
PS I've got a profile on , i'm just 2 lay-z 2 sign in. -.-;
trusuprise
2004-10-15
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you used the Goshinboku to bring them together after so long, like in the movie, very nice touch. I do, however feel that the fic would have been better off with out the lyrics, something about, "my boo" being too casual and not suming up the intensity of the love felt between Inuyasha and Kagome. Nice job though!
demongoddessYume
2004-10-14
ch 1,
abusegood job Kalika-chan! lol guess who! i like your story. You should try a Sango and Miroku for the second chapter and/or sequeal. did i spell that right? *shrugs*oh well *goes and searches for her bishes*
Dreamer for Eternity
2004-10-13
ch 1,
abuseWell,it was good,short.Hope you make more stories and thanks for reviewing for my stories!!~^_^
SpiritSealedSlumber
2004-10-08
ch 1,
abuseWell, hey you! I'm glad you emailed me, otherwise I never would have know that this was up! ^.^ And let me just say, I LOVE this one-shot; it's definitely one of the better ones I've read, and I've read quite a few! Personally, I think you should leave it a one-shot, but it's your decision. Anyways, I wanna say thank you for all of the times you reviewed my stories; it makes me feel that I write better when the same people come back to keep reading a story of mine! Well, I'll say it again; you have a wonderful story here. Please keep writing? I'll be sure to make sure that I read and review them, to let you know what I think. Ah, gotta go... My BF's on the phone... TTYL, and Ja ne! -S.S.S.
Bent not Broken
2004-10-02
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so cute! I almost cried at the beginning! -snifflez- It ended good!
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