Hmm...very interesting idea. Very nice, very nice indeed. I'm not sure I liked the jump to Luna though, but it was a oneshot, so these things must be over looked. Very nice. In my opinion, you should write a longish fic concerning Luna and Hary. They interest me. What blood is Luna of? That could be an interesting conflict. Depending on how bad off things were at the ministery adn all that. You know. Anyways, nice fic.

coffee thing was sweet, though i didn't like the ending

I liked it. Trelawney as a romance councilor was good. Harry's mistake at the end was funny. Thanks for writing.

it wasn't sucky! i liked-no-LOVED it!

*sniff* Meep! I love it!
*goes and drinks coffee. *make a disgusted face.*
Meh. Time to dump him.

Ha great fic.
Lots of love,

Holly

lol! Two o'clock! Time for dinner! This is hilarious! I love it!

wow that was so cool. really nice I love the idea. Wonderful job

hi , i just read your story and i like it
i hope you do a other one

Some of the words don't seem like the right ones; like you could have used better words and certain parts. Mainly concerning with the last few lines.

I liked this fic, it's cute. The coffee/relationship bitter/happy thing was great. It's one of those things that looks great and sappy on paper, but just crazy in real life.