Update man! I love the story! and you and I have so much in common!

Aw! its cute! (not really cute, as in furry litte creatures, more like amusing because that's actually how becki talks etc.) XD! Keep it coming!

well that's good! you're back! I thought you had left us or dropped dead there for a second. Not pressuring you, I'm an honors sophmore too (though we don't get AP classes until we're junious, strange but I'm not complaining) so just take your time and get everything organized. I don't even remember what happend alot in this story. Something about a guy coming telling someone got kidnapped or... idk, something. But it kinda confused me. I'm sure this next one's gonna be awesome! Go on wit cha bad self! -HH

hey i think it is a good idea that you want to rewrite this especially if it is as immature and fast paced as you say. I have to admit that I thought it was kind of weird that Rae would just kiss him in the graveyard when two minutes before she preffered to die than date him. But I can't wait to see the new chapters and all so thanks for the "update"

kinky, me like. I definately noticed the lines from 10 Things I Hate About You. Definately one of my favorite movies.

I understand the anger but raven's acting all bitchy...
poo.
Nice story though... jus' wish it weren't rae who had to be all mean.

why don't you flippin' update already?

UPDATECyborg: (After recovering) Ooh, my stomach! I feel like I ate a tire!
Raven: That's a distinct possibility.
Cyborg: OH!! You know what would be good? Let's all go out for WAFFLES! RAVEN!! You like WAFFLES, DON'TCHA?
Raven: (Dryly) More than life itself.

Beast Boy: I may not be smart enough to do everything, but I'm dumb enough to try ANYTHING!

Robin: We need to stop him before he hurts himself...or somebody else.
Raven: Or an innocent street sign...
(Cyborg devours a poor defenseless street sign)

Gizmo: (To Robin, angrily) Nice shootin', sporfbrain! You kludgeheads have any idea how long it's gonna take me to get from his stinkin' can all the way UP TO HIS BRAIN?!

Starfire: Why does he speak of subterranean vegetables?
Gizmo: (Sneers) You don't know crud. The virus is messing with his central processor, you know, his brain.

Gizmo: What the... blob boy?
Beast Boy: I'm here to help.
Gizmo: Oh, lucky stinkin' me, a goofbag with a nucleus for a brian.

Cyborg: (To a portable money machine) You can keep your sprinkles, I NEED RASPBERRY FILLINGS!

Cyborg: (Munching on a table) Who ordered this pizza? It's cheese-tastic!

Cyborg: (After eating dozens of money notes then spitting them out) NO, NOT MACARONI!

Cyborg: (Wakes up) PIE! (Robin drops the tranquillizer gun containing microscopic sized Gizmo, then looks and sees Starfire and Raven trying to restrain Cyborg. Robin shoots at Cyborg with the tranquillizer gun and scores a direct hit) HOT LINKS!! Oh, yeah... (Crashes through a wall)
Starfire: The injection was a success?
Robin: I'm not sure. (On the communicator) Gizmo, report. Are you inside Cyborg?
Gizmo: Oh, I'm inside him all right. But I'm not in his brain - I'm in his butt.

Beast Boy: (After Gizmo has attacked the virus) Yeah! We kicked it's virus butt!
Gizmo: Wake up, pinhead! that was only a drone. There could be thousands of drones. We have to delete the viral core.
Beast Boy: (Thinks fast) Uh, I knew that. I was just, uh, testing you! And you passed!

Gizmo: No stinkin' way! I'm not fixing that overgrown bucket of roboscrunge, and there's not a thing that you grot-sniffers could ever say or do that'll make me... (Gizmo tries to leave, but Raven appears in front of him and takes off her hood, revealing a evil looking monster face from Gizmo's viewpoint. Gizmo turns back, looking very shaken) I'll help...

Cyborg: Oh! Star! Remember that purple wiggly Tamaranean pie thingie you made that was full of bugs?
Starfire: My stewed grunthmek which made you physically sick?
Cyborg: You gotta cook up some of that!

Cyborg: Whatever got into me, it's out.
Robin: Beast Boy! He did it!
Cyborg: (Notices a green stain on his arm) Aww, man! That better not be who I think it is!

Robin: Take it easy Cyborg. It's us.
Raven: We're here to take you home.
Starfire: You remeber who we are, yes?
(Cyborg sees the Titans as eggs)
Cyborg: You're the nasty egg people who stole all my waffles!

Cyborg: (Sees Robin as a steak) We need gravy! AND PLENTY OF IT!

Robin: What is going on?
Cyborg: Oh, I'll tell you what's going on. This is the best peanut brittle I've ever tasted! (Cyborg starts licking the sofa as Raven and Starfire exchange puzzled looks)

Cyborg: Hey, did y'all know there are 456 varieties of yams? I like yams! Yams, yams, yams, yams, yams, yams, yams...

Gizmo: (Examining Cyborg) Ew! Your friend is thrashed. What kind of sludgesniffing idiot gets himself infected with the Endzone Virus?
(The Titans glare at Beast Boy, who shrinks to a small size)
Beast Boy: He had some help.

Beast Boy: Cyborg! What are you doing here?
Cyborg: It's my room.. what are you doing here?
Beast Boy: (Short pause) Just practicing my nose whistling... (Whistles)

sorry ramdom quotes rock. Robin starred in m little ponies (TRUE, TV TOME, look it up.]

Ooh, I love it! Sorry it took me so long to review it, I guess that I forgot before... YAY! I'm in THIS story too! YAYAYAY! I can't wait to read more. See ya, and keep writing ALL of your incredibly AWESOME stories!

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Are we just gonna sit around starin or are you gonna update?

UPDATENOW MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHa

ooh, this is soo realistic, i can c this hppening, poor raven. update soon

hihihi

okay any way as i was saying, i can so relate. my cousin and i were born 12 hours apart. im kinda a goth ( i wear nothing but black and love dark stuff) and valeries preppy (pink ::shudders:: need i say more) we go through ALOT of this kind of stuff. but we are still friends brought together by TEEN TITANS AND GHOSTS ( we are both fans of the haunting dead)

bye

oh god! you do NOT know how much i can relate. i have to go ill explain the relation later.
BYE