i loved it ! wonderfully written, hope to see more stories from you

i do believe i like this scene more than Ms. Austen's ACTUAL book. Lovely. Well done.

That was really good. Keep up the good work.

Oh, that's hot! I wonder how they'd be after marriage... haha you imagine? This is just a fun little AU teaser. :)

Oh no , my heart stopped...this was so freaking adorable.

i loved it.

That was great! Mr. Darcy finally took some real action!

hehehe, that waz good! i luved your style of writing, it imitates J.A.'s so very much; mine could not possibly rival it! it was a little funny when she pulled away, or i at least thought it was; i always think everythng is funny...write more P=P stories please!
E.B.isme

That was pretty good, but I think Elizabeth was being way too mean to him. I mean, he's being all 'civil' and polite and stuff and she's exploding? The ending was a little too quick as well. But I still liked it. I really like the way you write.

This was a lot of fun! A little out of character for Darcy, but I'm not complaining, honestly! It's one of things I secretly wish to happen every time I read the novel, even though I know it would never happen.

Very Good! You write very well, and your story flowed nicely. I really like Darcy catching her in his library :-D

I believe everyone has the time to review, some just lack the inclination.
This was a wonderful fic, I did feel for Elizabeth. Thank you,
-E

A good oneshot. what's up with all of these one shot thingys?

aww.. the ending was sweet!

Um...wait.What.Shall. I . Say. About. This. It is so unique and quite a sweet little thing