Edward love this fanfic so far. Edward thinks it is funny the frist day Edward read this was a day after Edward had finished watching the Cowboy Bebop TV Show(on dvd!) What Edward thinks u can work on though is saying the former ISSP detective. But that is just Edward's advice u don't have to take. Besides that the fanific is really good and u should update soon. Edward will check every day and... Date interuped!