Okay. That made me cry, that is one of the most depressing stories I've ever read. I loved it though. What's the black thing that kills Roald?

that just might have been the single most depressing thing I've ever read. I loved it.

OMG! It was so sad!

wow thats great really emotional and strong...and its K/N lol.

Oh my god that made me cry! You are a beautiful writer with unspeakable talent and I hope to be able to read more of your fan fic’s

Wow. Depressing. Really good.

wow. Luv da writing but a bit depressing.

wow...that was...really deep...it really shook me...and the prophecy actually soumded like one that would probably be true in that time...and the part how the sword stabbed both their hearts...well...it was...really well written!keep up the excellent writing...you know...i would really love to see a kel/neal fic that wasnt a oneshot...but...its just an idea...dnt think you have to do anything about it...keep up the writing!
*Sam*

Wow, this is so great! I love how you end it, especially, with the prophecy scattered line by line between paragraphs. Awesome.

Wow... so sad... and beautiful...

Woh...

*sniff* Nolee, I... I'm seriously crying here. I can't believe... It was really good, just... Oh gods, Nolee! You made me cry! Ahem *gets oer self* In a word, wow. That was way sad. But way realistic! The part where Roald got killed made me laugh right through my tears! The little jerk...

Oh! That was so powerful! Very moving, especially the bits in italics. A very well written piece of work.

hmph. always though roald waz like his dear 'ole daddy. not a backbone in his body. *sighs* how twistedly sad and romantic... perfect way for them to die, feel a bit sorry for neal's daughter, though... *grins* this ficcy rox mai sox, though!

That was SO good. I really liked it! You fitted in the prophecy really well and the story was amazing. Great story!