...Wow this makes no sense whatsoever. But funny, that's what counts. Oh well, nice...random story.

...not your ordinary(sp?) fanfic...*on floor laughing* I like it XD

Penguins and puffins. Someone has a thing for arctic sea birds. But yes, the internet simply leads to lesbian porn. And anime music videos. and GameFaqs.
Well, I can see that it's been a while since the last update, so I'll consider it not done, much like my story :). Funny, but sometimes too stupid. Overall grade. B
Poor Asgard. and my mind is burning from unexpected yaoi. Run from yaoi! RUN

Mrs. Maxwell? Did Virginia get married when I wasn't looking?! Fun, fun, fun. Gahooliday... one does wonder what holidays they have on Filgaia... Oh! We can always ask Armengard!

Heh. Phobia's. One after another. Funny. Great part was the townfolk debating over John X. Smith. I wonder if it's John Doe (the optional Boss at Werner's Place) they're all talking bout. O.K, so it's supposed to be a rounded critique, but since it's a stupid comedy, I don't think I can give any constructive criticism, cus its supposed to be bad. But I'd cut down on the random violance or stuff randomly happening. Funny once in a while, but not around every corner.
Now, when will Cecelia's and Mirabelle's Asgards show up? :)

Florina? An Android? Where'd mah socks go?
Fun fact: In the Wilad ARMs Advanced the 3rd Artbook, Florina is listed as "Girl In Garden". Meaning she didn't have a name in the original Japanese version. But c'mon, we all obviously knew it was Mariel the whole time.
Oh, Review: Impressed by your knowledge of the series. Twilight Venom, original and 2nd Ignition. Throw in some Alter Code:F and it's a party! Love Asgard man!

Jus to let you know, I'm pretty sure Star Roe is a beetle. A giant rocket powered holy beetle of light. I know.
Good stuff again. Man, I am so behind the times when it comes to fan fics...

Wow. Just wow. Though this is only chapter 1, I'm greatly impressed. A stupid comedy like this hasn't made me LOL since From Baskar With Love. Thumbs Up, and now to keep reading!
Oh, the Raftina thing, hilarious...

Yes, someone agrees with me about Jim Davis. What a sell-out. I can't point out the technicalities? C'mon! I so can, did you not see me do that? Anyway, penguins on a desert wasteland of a planet just...Tetsuo will shut up about that now. There's no point in taking it anywhere. Just continue with my review. You're also right about WA3 and it's bad ideas to not finish certain stories. And you're right, even though I don't care for them, there are no yoai possibilities.
Bob, the happy homicidal clown? I feel we missed out on something hilarious. Maybe a flashback?
Wait, where did an internet on Filgaia come from suddenly? I don't think they would have one so fast, and where do the pictures of lesbian pictures come from? Would the Guardians bribe women into making these photos?
I love that argument between Moor and the 2nd NPC...it's a nostalgic thing, but always hilarious.
All in all, another great chapter. And, still, why the penguins? If I could, I would kill them all off just so I don't have to hear about them anymore!

That's the funniest thing I've read in a long time. The narration was awesome, all of it.

*creak, bzzaat, brain shut down-bbuhhzzt*.. Gruh, my brain, it's so.. in AWE at your mad, awesome, writing skillz! Yes, I think I laughed the whole way through.>XD In emoticon speak I was all like. O_O and then ^_^ and then.. O_o? and then XD and then it was like -_-;;, and then.. !_! and then.. :-D -> - 3_>

Teefa: Excuse me while I laugh my head off! Another great chapter (begins laughing)

Prier: I haven't seen a guy so red since. . .well nevermind.

Lufia: Do tell Prier; we all know about your relationship already.

Prier: (whacks Lufia with her baton) Not now!

Rutee: And Gallows missing the point, fun!

'...they entered the town of Jolly Roger only to get thrown out once again before the words even had time to appear above their head.'

XD*dies*

'She ran over to Clive. "You turn into a werewolf and have another baby."'

*sniggers*

'I just want to jump off the nearest ledge and drown... wait a second... '

ROFLMAO

Yes...a battle between NPCs and Penguins...ok...how the Hell and where the Hell did penguins come from on this desert wasteland of a planet...How does one consume over 500 beers in 5 hours?
Domingo Montoya, Princess Bride shows up for no reason, but I like it later when he is all about yelling that the guy killed his father and says the same thing six times...uhm...I talk too much.
Yes, the muffin is horrible, but the bagel with cream cheese is the most evil breakfast item. I am right now in a rehab program for overcoming my addiction to bagels. What a sad fall it was. Bagels all the time, any time. Which led me to realize that Dunkin' Donuts is great because you can get breakfast items there all day! Ha ha!...I need a bagel? Do you have one? I know I want to limit myself to two a week, but I've already had three this week, so I may as well eat many more, so...c'mon! Don't cut me off! i need more! Garlic bagel? Fine, whatever, I don't care, I just need one! Tho...Garlic...not that great, but garlic is good for me, so ok, give me the bagel...
You're not going to give me a bagel are you?
PS: I am being serious, I am a recovering bagel with cream cheese addict. I can only have 2 a week now, but I let myself eat one bonus one yesterday...oh, such a bad boy...
Anyway, you can watch the story fade into the distance through binoculars? Oh Virginia...and poor Jet...What organs were he missing, or was it simply just the spiked beer?
Actually, I used PS, and a PS goes at the end of the thing...I bent the rules of reality, someone is going to erase me noo.o.o..o.o...o...[Fading away]