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Strikergirl1 1/6/13 . chapter 1
Please update..
Lphipps21 12/19/12 . chapter 12
please update
Maverick88 11/10/12 . chapter 12
I'm really loving this. But I guess another writer's block is plaguing you? I know the feeling, unfortunately. Maybe this will help you get past it. Uncas and Alice kissed at the waterfall scene, but it was cut away from the final montage and they used the slow motion to hide it. However, in the next scene with Alice you see a braid that wasn't there before, put there by Uncas. I would have loved seeing him do that. Ah...anyway, thank you for what you've written. I've been obsessed with this couple after accidentally catching the movie on TV last week. There was so much there we didn't get to see, I think.
AberrantAtHeart 9/26/12 . chapter 12
Best LOTM story I have read by far. It's been a while since the last update... I hope you'll update soon I am excited for the dance scene. Are you planning on continuing this story?
Guest 8/1/12 . chapter 12
ah great story,your uncas is absolutly awesome..please continue with the story!
Susannah-Belle 6/16/12 . chapter 12
you have to finish this story.I'll die if you don't! sigh...
lescornichons 3/13/12 . chapter 12
More please!
Lady Rose 3/3/12 . chapter 12
Please, please update! I love this story.
Eilan21 12/30/11 . chapter 12
I'm really enjoying this story, it's beautiful and very well written and I hope you are going to add another chapter as soon as possible... I can't wait to read what happens next!
aline 10/24/11 . chapter 1
love your story. thank you so much for writing it
Leah 10/15/11 . chapter 12
Wow, am really loving this story! You have written these characters really well, I love the inlcuded scene at the end, I wondered how she came to have those braids in her hair! Please continue to write, even if you just complete the waterfall scene. I would love to read your take on that!
uncaslover 10/4/11 . chapter 12
ummm hello write more I love this story...
Cikun 8/12/11 . chapter 12
Please, please update. You write so beautifully. I can't wait to see whether uncas is a good dancer or not. Please do continue :-)
nipponophile 8/9/11 . chapter 12
Sweet and beautiful. Glad her first kiss was with Uncas! And I love how he offers to be strong for her when she can't be.
AzulaDragonfly 8/7/11 . chapter 12
I just discovered this story, and may I say that this is one of the best Alice and Uncas stories I have read on here :)

I realise you're busy with school and that but I hope you update real soon.

Paula
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