Just wondering if you are going to continue Ascent? I LOVE that story, as with this one.

Thanks.

Love Sonia :)

WOW. This is a GREAT story. Fantastic plot, well-written, thought-provoking, character development, very complex . . . I can't wait to start the sequel! GOOD JOB

Belthazar, you watch Charmed don't you? I love Cole! And that leads to me loving Belthazar.

Brilliant story!

it is a pretty gruesome story in that you can portray torture, pain, sexual items and stuff along those lines vividly but a nice refresher after the other Mia/Men stories that were...sappy
(:

The nightmares you conjure are... intense.

Where did you come up with those haunting ideas? Were they snippets from nightmares you have had yourself?

Belthazar... the devil in disguise.

clever.

Wow. A king cobra. They really are beautiful creatures.

But, I somehow get the feeling that Hermione is going to end up with a new familiar...

profound.

I love it.

Stunning.

So dark. Unswervingly so. It was haunting and relentless reading, I'm sure the writing of it was too. I commend you for your high integrity with this. It would have been so easy to be maudlin or sloppy or predictable, but you really cranked out some impressive things. I am off to read the sequel, and Merlin, Hermione better get some justice, if not a little peace...

Truly Amazing! I Loved It! Hugs + Kisses! I Totally Love It!

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This has to be THE fanfic on the entire website. The characterization, logic, wittiness, plot, reactions, and style add so much to the Harry Potter characters than JK Rowling could ever imagine. The story was brutally honest in the way it described everyone's reaction to everything around them.

This fic encompasses everything that a fic should set out to do. You had no hero-complex!Hermione. Lupin was so accepting and a pillar of strength for Hermione. Harry didn't believe Hermione at first; Ron is still his ignorant **. Neville felt betrayed by something he will never understand. Even Ginny gave up hope because she knew what Voldemort's influence. Lucius and Draco Malfoy (and also Wormtail) played such a huge role in Hermione's outlook that it was believable. Carmen's and Voldemort's interaction with each other is so very interesting. But, of course, the most interesting interaction would have to be Hermione and Voldemort.

Once again, from an inconspicuous reviewer, you have done a great job on this fic.

Eh...I am too lazy to sign in, but I will leave a well deserved review anyway. The last bit with Dumbledore and Harry was definately beautiful. It is how I have felt throughout all the Harry Potter books. It is the ORIGINAL; what else can I say? Everything so far is beautifully written and the progression is amazingly well written. I do not particularly have any criticisms to give, but I do wish that I am getting close to the HG/TR-LV part. My mind needs SOME romance, if it can be called that. =]