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Rachel
2008-07-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseI feel bad for you. I know how writer's block is. I just started back on a story I haven't worked on in a year. But I really like the plot. I would suggest you read other peoples fanfics. One: You'll find others in the same situation, and two: you can relax into reading someone else's work that isn't your own. I write, but I get a couple ideas from other authors. Great work on the story, it's truly believable. I was starting to wonder why people weren't noticing the fact that the Senshi's families weren't even noticing their behaviors and actions.
A'Wunderkind
2008-07-19
ch 5,
abuseGlad to hear you are alive and doing well!
micati
2007-11-18
ch 4,
abuseI hope you plan on continuing this. It's really good - you seem to have a talent for story-writing. I've decided to add you to my Favourite Authors and Author Alert lists.
hkestal
2007-09-26
ch 5,
abuseThis is cool. Won't Mina and the others notice that he looks just like the generals of the negaverse?
Moonlight Petal
2007-09-13
ch 5,
abuseUpdate soon! I love the story!
Laura819
2007-07-29
ch 5, anon.
abuseThat scene at the end was just hilarious. Update soon!
Laura819
2007-07-29
ch 4, anon.
abuseThe suspense! The intrigue! You're incredible! Please keep working on this story!
Laura
2007-07-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseI loved Malachite's reaction to Mina. He was practically drooling! It's going to be love at first sight, and I can't wait!
Laura
2007-07-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseI've decided that you must be a genius. There's no way you can come up with such great stuff if you aren't. Love everything you do!
Laura819
2007-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou've made Mina and Malachite my favorite Sailor Moon pairing. I love the way you write them.
xxeclipse-of-the-soulxx
2007-07-10
ch 5,
abuseUm... Melvin's always been creepy... The school day was funny, tho'. And the part with the goldfish, and the Yakuza list, ha ha! That was great.
xxeclipse-of-the-soulxx
2007-07-10
ch 4,
abuseAw, that stinks. I'd hate to be in Mina's shoes.
xxeclipse-of-the-soulxx
2007-07-10
ch 3,
abuseHa ha, their first meeting was funny... and how he had to put up with the parents... poor Malachite.
xxeclipse-of-the-soulxx
2007-07-10
ch 2,
abuseYay! I must read more!
xxeclipse-of-the-soulxx
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseOoh, this is good! So are your other stories, I'm seeing a pattern...
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