I know its been like 6 years since you wrote this, but I just stumbled upon it and needed to let you know that I think its brilliant.

your writting style is beautiful, you capture strng feelings, and put into words exactly how some things feel. this is very in character in my opinion (as in character as a KaiJou fic can be) I could really see Kaiba writing something to this effect.

Thanks for the wonderful short story.

w00t! :D i very unique fic jen! i thought it was really interesting that seto started the letter out with the words, "you are my fire" instead of something mundane like: dear jou. XP it stood out to me immendiately. also, that he has no closing sentence, like: sincerely, yours truly, or perhaps, love. so i suppose he is keeping to his formal ways. because of course, he ended the letter with his full name.

all in all, this is a well thought out and innovative fic. maybe you could write jounouchi's response as a sequel? _ only an idea.

anyway, i expect to see much more from you!

-VT

Seto/Jou Forever!

Heya Jen Jen! ; I like this... XD

And I have nothing else to say. XP

I'm at a loss!

T_T

Oh wells...

-Miso

Ooh. This looks like it'll be good. Can't wait for more...

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*squeals* DO CONTINUE! onegai?

Sapphire

Interesting...i love your writing style! Hope you update soon!

o.o Nice pleases make it in to something more

A wonderful and captivating read, giving a most intrigueing and fascinating perspective on the possible emotions between Kaiba and Joey. I enjoyed this very much. _

Wow...this is great! I love it...very discriptive and full of emotion

Really good