 Violent-Tendencies 2004-10-16 . chapter 1w00t! :D i very unique fic jen! i thought it was really interesting that seto started the letter out with the words, "you are my fire" instead of something mundane like: dear jou. XP it stood out to me immendiately. also, that he has no closing sentence, like: sincerely, yours truly, or perhaps, love. so i suppose he is keeping to his formal ways. because of course, he ended the letter with his full name.
all in all, this is a well thought out and innovative fic. maybe you could write jounouchi's response as a sequel? ^_~ only an idea.
anyway, i expect to see much more from you!
-VT
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